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Array ( [sid] => 76000 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Monster within [time] => 2004-12-16 08:47:38 [hometext] => *~* [bodytext] => laying on my back,
I stare into his eyes,
above mine.

Tangled within the sheets,
laying together,
feelings emerge.

The next day I walk past you,
you look at me with a different look,
was it something I said,
was it something I did?

You push me up against the school wall,
you look deep into my eyes,
and begin to yell.

"How could you do that to me!",
"I thought you loved me!"

I look towards my feet,
trying to block out your voice.
You lift my head up,
and slap my cheek.

A burning sensation flows throughout my face,
red begins to show upon my face,
as a river of endless tears fall from my eyes.

I push you away,
as I run down the hall.
I may have done something wrong,
but that doesn't mean you have to hit me!
I realize what I did, and I regret ever seeing him...
You're a monster! A monster of jealousy!

You beging to follow me,
down the hall I run,
looking back, running faster when you get closer...
finally you catch up,
you grab my arm.

"Let Go of me! Get off of me!!"
I yell and I yell,
but you cover my mouth with you hands..
"Shush now little one, I'm not going to ..."
I stop you in mid-sentance as I bite down on your finger..
You let go of my arm, as I run as fast as I can...

I call the one I was with last night,
and tell him what you did to me...
He may be your friend,
but he'll stick up for me....
that's something you'd never think of doing...

you may be in love with me,
but I'm in love with HIM...

So say your goodbyes,.
as tears begin to flood your eyes,
you'll never see me again,
I never want to see you again...
I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU SO MUCH!!
I just want you out of my life!
I want to be free! I dont want to be held down!
Leave me alone! Just LEAVE!!

...those words that i once spoke...
...those feelings that I once showed...
...are nothing in which I feel anymore...
...I am my own person...
...why can't you just let me be...


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Deathly_Rose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
The Monster within

Contributed by Deathly_Rose on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:47:38 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



laying on my back,
I stare into his eyes,
above mine.

Tangled within the sheets,
laying together,
feelings emerge.

The next day I walk past you,
you look at me with a different look,
was it something I said,
was it something I did?

You push me up against the school wall,
you look deep into my eyes,
and begin to yell.

"How could you do that to me!",
"I thought you loved me!"

I look towards my feet,
trying to block out your voice.
You lift my head up,
and slap my cheek.

A burning sensation flows throughout my face,
red begins to show upon my face,
as a river of endless tears fall from my eyes.

I push you away,
as I run down the hall.
I may have done something wrong,
but that doesn't mean you have to hit me!
I realize what I did, and I regret ever seeing him...
You're a monster! A monster of jealousy!

You beging to follow me,
down the hall I run,
looking back, running faster when you get closer...
finally you catch up,
you grab my arm.

"Let Go of me! Get off of me!!"
I yell and I yell,
but you cover my mouth with you hands..
"Shush now little one, I'm not going to ..."
I stop you in mid-sentance as I bite down on your finger..
You let go of my arm, as I run as fast as I can...

I call the one I was with last night,
and tell him what you did to me...
He may be your friend,
but he'll stick up for me....
that's something you'd never think of doing...

you may be in love with me,
but I'm in love with HIM...

So say your goodbyes,.
as tears begin to flood your eyes,
you'll never see me again,
I never want to see you again...
I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU SO MUCH!!
I just want you out of my life!
I want to be free! I dont want to be held down!
Leave me alone! Just LEAVE!!

...those words that i once spoke...
...those feelings that I once showed...
...are nothing in which I feel anymore...
...I am my own person...
...why can't you just let me be...






Copyright © Deathly_Rose ... [ 2004-12-16 08:47:38]
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Re: The Monster within (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:55:15 AM AEST
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I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
tHIS IS SO POWERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!
i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love it!!!!!!!!
so powerful!

love you

*~givingin~*


Re: The Monster within (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:22:53 AM AEST
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wow that was hard hitting and powerful,
pixie xx




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