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Array ( [sid] => 76261 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why She Went away! [time] => 2004-12-17 20:11:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => These feeling’s are building up inside of me,
As I think of the past and the way they used to be.
Now as I get older people get bitter,
For I am no longer a little girl.
The sight of a little girl is disappearing,
And one of a woman is appearing through the light.
The blue eyed little baby girl is now,
5’2 16 years old,
And no one can picture her as beautiful as she is.
Her ways may be different even odder from yours,
But she’s the same as you just with different beliefs.
Although you may see her as an attitude little punk,
With no problems of her own,
She’s really hurting inside.
With the feeling that no one cares,
As she cries when you’re not looking,
Or paying attention to what is being said,
All she wants is your love and approval of her.
As time goes,
People show her the opposite of what she wants to see.
The less you see of her the happier you be,
Just as long as she is alive,
You’ll show everyone else the love you should be showing her.
The day she dies, you’ll collapse in tears,
Not showing her what she wanted -----Love,
That’s all she ever wanted but you were to busy,
Giving it to all the others.
Now she’s gone and you’re hurting, in need of her,
Love.
Now you think about how it was when you wanted,
Someone to love and she were there to give it to you.
The time you lost your best friend, she was there,
The day you almost died, she was there,
Even the day you became a man, she was there to,
Give it to you.
Those times you lied to her face,
And cheating while she was at work,
She forgave you.
All this girl ever wanted in return was to be loved,
For someone to let her know they were there for her.
But you just ignored her,
Made fun of her.
Now she is gone and you wish you never,
Did those things.
You can’t take things you did in the past away if,
The one person you need to tell you love them or,
Your sorry is gone.
Why must the ones we were mean to, go away,
Way too soon?
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Why She Went away!

Contributed by PinkYoshi on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:11:27 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



These feeling’s are building up inside of me,
As I think of the past and the way they used to be.
Now as I get older people get bitter,
For I am no longer a little girl.
The sight of a little girl is disappearing,
And one of a woman is appearing through the light.
The blue eyed little baby girl is now,
5’2 16 years old,
And no one can picture her as beautiful as she is.
Her ways may be different even odder from yours,
But she’s the same as you just with different beliefs.
Although you may see her as an attitude little punk,
With no problems of her own,
She’s really hurting inside.
With the feeling that no one cares,
As she cries when you’re not looking,
Or paying attention to what is being said,
All she wants is your love and approval of her.
As time goes,
People show her the opposite of what she wants to see.
The less you see of her the happier you be,
Just as long as she is alive,
You’ll show everyone else the love you should be showing her.
The day she dies, you’ll collapse in tears,
Not showing her what she wanted -----Love,
That’s all she ever wanted but you were to busy,
Giving it to all the others.
Now she’s gone and you’re hurting, in need of her,
Love.
Now you think about how it was when you wanted,
Someone to love and she were there to give it to you.
The time you lost your best friend, she was there,
The day you almost died, she was there,
Even the day you became a man, she was there to,
Give it to you.
Those times you lied to her face,
And cheating while she was at work,
She forgave you.
All this girl ever wanted in return was to be loved,
For someone to let her know they were there for her.
But you just ignored her,
Made fun of her.
Now she is gone and you wish you never,
Did those things.
You can’t take things you did in the past away if,
The one person you need to tell you love them or,
Your sorry is gone.
Why must the ones we were mean to, go away,
Way too soon?




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Re: Why She Went away! (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:24:19 PM AEST
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good write.


Re: Why She Went away! (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 02:01:36 AM AEST
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awesome write on teenager growing up.. I enjoyed your version of it.. your still young and have many lessons of life to go through and its good you have your own views.. everyone gotta find who they truly are and where they belong.. great write

Peace and hope
JENNI




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