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Array ( [sid] => 76290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heartbreaker [time] => 2004-12-18 00:06:13 [hometext] => A poem by my friend hannah... [bodytext] => I lure you in, drawing you closer
I show you my affection
Nearer and nearer I pull you
getting you in close enough to feel the connection
All I want is to have you
I want you in my collection
I look into your eyes and study them
Staring deeper into your perfection
I smile and hug you, pretend it's okay
You think you're in the right direction
I dig deep into your emotions
Deeper under you skin like an infection
I read you like a bood and drag you in
I watch you carefully making my inspecion
After just a short period of time
I decide to make you my selection
I tease you and turn you on
more and more I beg, you've got an erection
I continue to sduce you in
come my dear, we don't need protection
After much proding and a good time
I go a different way, you face rejection
After some comments [from you] I realize my problem
I sit in the dark in some deep reflection
To much examination I see the true me
Through your words I see my projection
Tears stream down my face,
My lip quivers, a pale complexion
Still in my room I think of what I"ve done
My mistakes have been realized, now for the correction
I've made my change, dug deep in
I've changed myself around after the dissection
I'm in a new light, I hope to not hurt again
Can you see the difference... my convection? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 259 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Unheard_Mute [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Heartbreaker

Contributed by Unheard_Mute on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 12:06:13 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I lure you in, drawing you closer
I show you my affection
Nearer and nearer I pull you
getting you in close enough to feel the connection
All I want is to have you
I want you in my collection
I look into your eyes and study them
Staring deeper into your perfection
I smile and hug you, pretend it's okay
You think you're in the right direction
I dig deep into your emotions
Deeper under you skin like an infection
I read you like a bood and drag you in
I watch you carefully making my inspecion
After just a short period of time
I decide to make you my selection
I tease you and turn you on
more and more I beg, you've got an erection
I continue to sduce you in
come my dear, we don't need protection
After much proding and a good time
I go a different way, you face rejection
After some comments [from you] I realize my problem
I sit in the dark in some deep reflection
To much examination I see the true me
Through your words I see my projection
Tears stream down my face,
My lip quivers, a pale complexion
Still in my room I think of what I"ve done
My mistakes have been realized, now for the correction
I've made my change, dug deep in
I've changed myself around after the dissection
I'm in a new light, I hope to not hurt again
Can you see the difference... my convection?




Copyright © Unheard_Mute ... [ 2004-12-18 00:06:13]
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Re: Heartbreaker (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:21:20 AM AEST
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Your friend wrote a very good poem. Thanks for sharing. :-)


Re: Heartbreaker (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:43:16 PM AEST
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::raised eyebrow:: i almost had heart failure for a minute. i thought you wrote this, because i wasnt really reading the description and im like "nooooo" not one of my favorite writers on here writing like this! ahhhh. no offense to your friend, but i rather like yours better.




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