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when really, it's a one-night fling.
One night of pleasure, nine months of pain,
he tells her he loves her and gives her his ring.

The pregnancy test does not lie,
all of her dreams shatter and die.
Total denial is what she finds,
excuses and options fill his mind

He told her he loved her,
she believed him too.
Now that he is gone,
there is nothing to do.

People think of love as a big thing,
when really, it's a one-night fling.
One night of pleasure, nine months of pain.
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A Liar's Love

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 03:52:10 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

People think of love as a big thing,
when really, it's a one-night fling.
One night of pleasure, nine months of pain,
he tells her he loves her and gives her his ring.

The pregnancy test does not lie,
all of her dreams shatter and die.
Total denial is what she finds,
excuses and options fill his mind

He told her he loved her,
she believed him too.
Now that he is gone,
there is nothing to do.

People think of love as a big thing,
when really, it's a one-night fling.
One night of pleasure, nine months of pain.
in a liar's love, it's all just a game.

Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2004-12-18 03:52:10]
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Re: A Liar's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 03:58:42 AM AEST
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wow...it sad that it's so true. great job.

Re: A Liar's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 04:06:54 AM AEST
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this is really very true but not sll lovers are liars

My friend Kendra got pregnant with her ex's baby and even after they broke up he still take care of them both and i also help

really a good write

Re: A Liar's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 05:05:07 AM AEST
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Sometimes love is a big things, but sometimes when someone thinks it's love, that's not really what it is at all.

Good write.

*hugs*
Phil xxx

Re: A Liar's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 05:48:20 AM AEST
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Love hurts when two people cant comunicate, and bringing a baby into that relationship will only worsen it. Great write so true a 5/5.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: A Liar's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Ada on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:43:17 AM AEST
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Certainly, the love that you are reffering to isn't real. You shouldn't have used the word love but rather lust

Re: A Liar's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:46:57 AM AEST
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It does happen that way sometimes. On the other hand, there are these good guys who stick around no matter what and help raise other men's children. But for liars, yes, this is the kind of "love" they give.
Good rhymes, good concise description!
Cheers!

Re: A Liar's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 09:32:41 AM AEST
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This is such a sad reality so many must face. One of the most trecherous masks we wear is Love.

peace
TS

Re: A Liar's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 01:19:40 PM AEST
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I liked this one alot

Re: A Liar's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 10:49:26 PM AEST
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a well done concept and portrayal. excellent use of stanzas. i think you captured the emotion in this exceptionally well with tone considering it wasnt you thats gone through this. very impressive poem.

Re: A Liar's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th November 2014 @ 10:03:23 PM AEST
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Really well written and gets to the reader. But, love is never a one-night fling, trust me. it is something much bigger and together than that.. I'm sorry that you feel that way. It will come, trust me.

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