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cant you see this pain i have
the way i walk n talk
the way i say goodbye
saying it like its the last time I'm going to see to you
not knowing which day is my last
if its today or tomorrow
when I'm 6ft under with my name on the head stone
and my last words on it saying
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You didnt open your eyes

Contributed by jenipher on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:22:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Open up your eyes
cant you see this pain i have
the way i walk n talk
the way i say goodbye
saying it like its the last time I'm going to see to you
not knowing which day is my last
if its today or tomorrow
when I'm 6ft under with my name on the head stone
and my last words on it saying
You didn't open up your eyes

Copyright © jenipher ... [ 2004-12-18 21:22:56]
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Re: You didnt open your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:31:16 PM AEST
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well i gree we never know when we are at deaths grasp,but if we are we should live each day to our fullest content.

Re: You didnt open your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Atari on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 10:08:25 PM AEST
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This is my perception of the poem. You want someone to open their eyes and see you before it's too late for them to see you. Or you're wanting them to notice what they've been doing to you just digging your grave for you. killing you because they won't look at you. I understand this! But don't let it be like that! There are so many things better than this! I promise!
Ariane

Re: You didnt open your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:32:19 AM AEST
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i know how you feel coz alot of ppl dont see how i feel alot of the times is coz i hide it so well

a really really good write

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