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Array ( [sid] => 7640 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Note to the wise [time] => 2002-11-29 05:00:00 [hometext] => The rules for what? [bodytext] => The runes say words like test and trivial,
Upset residual, mess and interludes,
The best I have is a neglected image tool,
Inspection residue, pests piano tune,
Yet the next best thing is a goose fixation,
Change the station; I heard it’s raining,
Where are your jeans? Are you my replacement?
I’ve waited ages, any point complaining?
The moon throws runes at glue conventions,
Its bad intentions, become expensive,
UN inspect my kitchen for nuclear weapons,
Cereal chaos and virus lessons,
I can’t be bothered yet I’m meticulous,
Ridiculous huge fist and systems intricate,
Failure to make clay from the Zeeown syndicate,
Discuss at the tram stop with genius idiots,
Tedious timing where the nails are nine inch,
Eighty 8 backed creatures are all so spineless,
I don’t have a mouth, but still pass me the wine list,
Built by minions; a sweet crumbly timepiece,
I have my eye on a new head to try on,
Give it a rest, let apparitions be bygones,
A blue and red 3D glass bypass that they got wrong,
Note to the wise, I wrote the rules in crayon.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Damon_Maynard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Note to the wise

Contributed by Damon_Maynard on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



The runes say words like test and trivial,
Upset residual, mess and interludes,
The best I have is a neglected image tool,
Inspection residue, pests piano tune,
Yet the next best thing is a goose fixation,
Change the station; I heard it’s raining,
Where are your jeans? Are you my replacement?
I’ve waited ages, any point complaining?
The moon throws runes at glue conventions,
Its bad intentions, become expensive,
UN inspect my kitchen for nuclear weapons,
Cereal chaos and virus lessons,
I can’t be bothered yet I’m meticulous,
Ridiculous huge fist and systems intricate,
Failure to make clay from the Zeeown syndicate,
Discuss at the tram stop with genius idiots,
Tedious timing where the nails are nine inch,
Eighty 8 backed creatures are all so spineless,
I don’t have a mouth, but still pass me the wine list,
Built by minions; a sweet crumbly timepiece,
I have my eye on a new head to try on,
Give it a rest, let apparitions be bygones,
A blue and red 3D glass bypass that they got wrong,
Note to the wise, I wrote the rules in crayon.




Copyright © Damon_Maynard ... [ 2002-11-29 05:00:00]
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Re: Note to the wise (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 09:13:29 AM AEST
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I'm not too sure what this means but I like it...
The last line is priceless... lol


Re: Note to the wise (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 03:19:27 PM AEST
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I agree with Daniela i dont much
understand this poem but the last
line is a keeper. Thanks for sharing
this one i enjoyed it alot
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Note to the wise (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 04:16:49 PM AEST
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THIS POEM IS WICKED, i love it


Re: Note to the wise (User Rating: 1 )
by RealCrystal on Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 01:41:10 AM AEST
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Too me it's not that hard to understand
you just have too read between the lines
to learn the lessons at hand

R.C.




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