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Array ( [sid] => 76460 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Remaining Pain [time] => 2004-12-19 13:31:08 [hometext] => Another emotional poem by me...please read and comment on this as it means alot to me, writing this is helping me get through a rough patch i'm in recently. :(!!!thanyou!!!! [bodytext] => I can’t go on
It hurts like hell,
My heart is broke
I feel unwell,
The pain won’t stop
And ceases to ease,
It’s growing worse
I’m getting worried,
I feel so alone
Although I do share,
They tried their best
But my heart doesn’t repair,
I’ve looked around
To help move on,
No-one comes near
As she’s my icon,
I know it’s sad
I shouldn’t care,
As you said before
It’s going no-where,
I was just a crush
We never got far,
Never went out
That’s why it’s bizarre,
I should move on
As you have already,
But what I feel
Is remaining steady [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sean88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Remaining Pain

Contributed by sean88 on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:31:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I can’t go on
It hurts like hell,
My heart is broke
I feel unwell,
The pain won’t stop
And ceases to ease,
It’s growing worse
I’m getting worried,
I feel so alone
Although I do share,
They tried their best
But my heart doesn’t repair,
I’ve looked around
To help move on,
No-one comes near
As she’s my icon,
I know it’s sad
I shouldn’t care,
As you said before
It’s going no-where,
I was just a crush
We never got far,
Never went out
That’s why it’s bizarre,
I should move on
As you have already,
But what I feel
Is remaining steady

Copyright Â© sean88 ... [ 2004-12-19 13:31:08]
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Re: Remaining Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:03:49 PM AEST
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great write... sorry about wut ur going through... hope u will be able to move on one day... maybe then u will c there r better things waiting for u... but i don't know... great write...

hope to c more from u soon

Jishes

Re: Remaining Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:42:16 PM AEST
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Feelings are tough... I liked the part where you said she was
your icon; and the part where you said "they tried their best /
but my heart doesn't repair"... I really felt that I can relate to that.

This brought out a lot of feelings in me and I thought you did a good
job putting your feelings out there.

~waos/kara

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