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Array ( [sid] => 76493 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => it still hurts [time] => 2004-12-19 19:32:15 [hometext] => its about my friend who commited suicide [bodytext] => It still hurts,
Where the white scars call your name.
It still hurts,
When I think about you.
It still hurts,
Because I'll never stopped loving you.
I promised you forever...
I hold myself to your ever beating hearts promises.
There's nothing about me you cant have.
There's nothing about the way you took your life that I still love.
Even though my love for you didn't end when your life did.
But it still hurts, when I'm here without you.
It still hurts when you promise me forever and I have to spend it without you.
It was the only thing that made me sad,
The loss of you.
It was the thing that made me this morbid mass you see before you.
Dying... and crying before you, forever, just like I promised.
And it hurts when I kill myself for a piece of you.
But you promised me forever, and forever in death we will have this.
This still hurting love that lasts forever in death.
You made me.
You had me.
You broke me.
You died...
And I cried,
And I hurt.
Now I die. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 13 [informant] => surge_joebot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

it still hurts

Contributed by surge_joebot on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 07:32:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

It still hurts,
Where the white scars call your name.
It still hurts,
When I think about you.
It still hurts,
Because I'll never stopped loving you.
I promised you forever...
I hold myself to your ever beating hearts promises.
There's nothing about me you cant have.
There's nothing about the way you took your life that I still love.
Even though my love for you didn't end when your life did.
But it still hurts, when I'm here without you.
It still hurts when you promise me forever and I have to spend it without you.
It was the only thing that made me sad,
The loss of you.
It was the thing that made me this morbid mass you see before you.
Dying... and crying before you, forever, just like I promised.
And it hurts when I kill myself for a piece of you.
But you promised me forever, and forever in death we will have this.
This still hurting love that lasts forever in death.
You made me.
You had me.
You broke me.
You died...
And I cried,
And I hurt.
Now I die.

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2004-12-19 19:32:15]
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Re: it still hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by punkprincess6689 on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 08:03:06 PM AEST
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wow that is a really powerful poem i hope that the ending wont become reality.

Re: it still hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 10:11:04 PM AEST
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Really touching...
hope you are ok...
Jenni

Re: it still hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by DanishPoet on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 01:46:11 AM AEST
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sad...
well written...

Toke

Re: it still hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 05:46:56 AM AEST
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I have to dido punkprincess,the ending better not come true.
otherwise another fantastic/emotional piece of writing.thanks for posting it
~keep the faith~
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