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Array ( [sid] => 76656 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Night Wish [time] => 2004-12-20 20:51:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Within the shadows beyond my door
Lies he in which I'm waiting for
With eyes of red and teeth of white
When he comes for me I shall not fight,
Cloaked in darkness behind me he stands
He holds my life in the palm of his hands
With one on each shoulder...I feel his touch
I want to be with him...I want this so much,
I close my eyes and drift away
The pain but for a moment stays
He gently lays me on the ground
Soon my heart will cease to pound,
I'm waking now... I'm in a bed
His palm rests lightly above my head
He's staring off and lost in space
A fire illuminates his pale handsome face,
I stare in pure wonder...I'm not in my room
How long was I out? How far was I moved?
The room's filled with candles, swords, silken sheets
My skin feels like ice...not one drop of heat,
I start to feel frightened and he suddenly turns
The look in his eyes makes me feel I've been burned
But he gives this sly smile and says "welcome to night"
I have no regrets...and I won't miss the light. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 43 [informant] => gimpie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Night Wish

Contributed by gimpie on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:51:16 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Within the shadows beyond my door
Lies he in which I'm waiting for
With eyes of red and teeth of white
When he comes for me I shall not fight,
Cloaked in darkness behind me he stands
He holds my life in the palm of his hands
With one on each shoulder...I feel his touch
I want to be with him...I want this so much,
I close my eyes and drift away
The pain but for a moment stays
He gently lays me on the ground
Soon my heart will cease to pound,
I'm waking now... I'm in a bed
His palm rests lightly above my head
He's staring off and lost in space
A fire illuminates his pale handsome face,
I stare in pure wonder...I'm not in my room
How long was I out? How far was I moved?
The room's filled with candles, swords, silken sheets
My skin feels like ice...not one drop of heat,
I start to feel frightened and he suddenly turns
The look in his eyes makes me feel I've been burned
But he gives this sly smile and says "welcome to night"
I have no regrets...and I won't miss the light.




Copyright © gimpie ... [ 2004-12-20 20:51:16]
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Re: Night Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Dan666 on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:36:49 AM AEST
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good it really painted a picture in my head nice one

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Re: Night Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:46:21 PM AEST
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Great poem. I love the imagery.




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