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Array ( [sid] => 76686 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Scribblings of this girl [time] => 2004-12-21 00:58:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => seducing me with her eyes
yet symbiotic
it's all semiotic
semantics and syntax
no pragmatismic release
just words spoken with a glance
no mortal has half a chance
to withstand the flutterings
and mutterings of inner voices
demanding choices beyond any but angel's control
and it eats like lye
alkalinic
wish for acidic so you don't want so much
discomfort is easier accepted
when disdain isn't excepted
and it burns like lightning bolts
wishing for something more revolting
not so rarefied and shocking
no longer shall she defrock
in a dreamland ecstasy
It's psychosis
voices demanding
and neurosis
inner understanding that this is more than
desire
a blood-like need
how i would bleed for her but she still is so reserved
conserving her virtue and dignity
for one who is worthy
one who is so much more than the sickness i've embraced
so i can only trace her image
on the one photo she gave to me
as a gesture of her humanity
leaving me with frustration
doubting all my qualitatively charming charms
and the quantitative disarming character i used to display
and make angels also feel this way [comments] => 1 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 22 [informant] => noid_schizoid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Scribblings of this girl

Contributed by noid_schizoid on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:58:43 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

seducing me with her eyes
yet symbiotic
it's all semiotic
semantics and syntax
no pragmatismic release
just words spoken with a glance
no mortal has half a chance
to withstand the flutterings
and mutterings of inner voices
demanding choices beyond any but angel's control
and it eats like lye
alkalinic
wish for acidic so you don't want so much
discomfort is easier accepted
when disdain isn't excepted
and it burns like lightning bolts
wishing for something more revolting
not so rarefied and shocking
no longer shall she defrock
in a dreamland ecstasy
It's psychosis
voices demanding
and neurosis
inner understanding that this is more than
desire
a blood-like need
how i would bleed for her but she still is so reserved
conserving her virtue and dignity
for one who is worthy
one who is so much more than the sickness i've embraced
so i can only trace her image
on the one photo she gave to me
as a gesture of her humanity
leaving me with frustration
doubting all my qualitatively charming charms
and the quantitative disarming character i used to display
and make angels also feel this way

Copyright © noid_schizoid ... [ 2004-12-21 00:58:43]
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Re: Scribblings of this girl (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:35:40 AM AEST
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Wow i love this, you have such a way with your words. Very poetic.

Hugs,
Jane x

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