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The pain and sorrow I feel, you couldn't imagine.

Why then, why can't I forget you?

I know if I remember you, It will only rise that ball of anger:

the scrutient I feel.

You are the complete opposite of me.

My life has succumbed to despair.

Your life Is meaningless.
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Tormented

Contributed by Mangs on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 11:51:23 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

The thoughts that torment my mind never letting up.

The pain and sorrow I feel, you couldn't imagine.

Why then, why can't I forget you?

I know if I remember you, It will only rise that ball of anger:

the scrutient I feel.

You are the complete opposite of me.

My life has succumbed to despair.

Your life Is meaningless.

Copyright © Mangs ... [ 2004-12-21 11:51:23]
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Re: Tormented (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:29:56 PM AEST
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this is really good i can feel every word of this so much right now......

Re: Tormented (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:15:13 PM AEST
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Well put angsty write

peace
TS

Re: Tormented (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:47:27 AM AEST
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i understand wat your goin though ....the only thing i could do was wait through the pain ...things will get better if u let them ...hope everythign works out
tractorbabe

Re: Tormented (User Rating: 1 )
by smooshable on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:30:51 PM AEST
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The beauty in this poem comes from its short yet sharp style. It's a huge temptation for writers to drag their pain out for as long as possible. Sometimes this can work quite well but its refreshing to see pain expressed in such a life like way. Sharp, deep and hard hitting. I can almost taste the agony expressed in this poem, well done.

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