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Array ( [sid] => 76885 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shaking [time] => 2004-12-22 14:04:03 [hometext] => enjoy! [bodytext] => I got your emiail
the other day
i got scared and i failed
and i did it my way

i don't know why
but i got so mad
you were what i had
now you're gone and still lie

(chorus)
i started shaking
for nothing
i wanna know why you came back
and my soul is still black
you made me cut my wrist
all cuz you think i didn't exsist
but eventhough i still have feelings for you
i'm lost and i don't know what to do
i'm shaking

you confuse me
and i don't know why
could we ever be?
i don't wanna anymore cry

when you left i started a new life
i picked up a knife
and then i used it
taking a fit

i lost my mind
i got so blind
all cuz of you
and you were untrue

i found myslef and the bottom of a whiskey bottle
listening to myself babble
all about you
and how much i loved you but hated you

you saw me in anger punching a mirror
now i feel killing you would be an honor

i let you loose
and i got a hold of booze
i drank myself half to death
now i got terrible dead breath


(chorus)
i started shaking
for nothing
i wanna know why you came back
and my soul is still black
you made me cut my wrist
all cuz you think i didn't exsist
but eventhough i still have feelings for you
i'm lost and i don't know what to do
i'm shaking [comments] => 2 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 34 [informant] => savedbydeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Shaking

Contributed by savedbydeath on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 02:04:03 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I got your emiail
the other day
i got scared and i failed
and i did it my way

i don't know why
but i got so mad
you were what i had
now you're gone and still lie

(chorus)
i started shaking
for nothing
i wanna know why you came back
and my soul is still black
you made me cut my wrist
all cuz you think i didn't exsist
but eventhough i still have feelings for you
i'm lost and i don't know what to do
i'm shaking

you confuse me
and i don't know why
could we ever be?
i don't wanna anymore cry

when you left i started a new life
i picked up a knife
and then i used it
taking a fit

i lost my mind
i got so blind
all cuz of you
and you were untrue

i found myslef and the bottom of a whiskey bottle
listening to myself babble
all about you
and how much i loved you but hated you

you saw me in anger punching a mirror
now i feel killing you would be an honor

i let you loose
and i got a hold of booze
i drank myself half to death
now i got terrible dead breath


(chorus)
i started shaking
for nothing
i wanna know why you came back
and my soul is still black
you made me cut my wrist
all cuz you think i didn't exsist
but eventhough i still have feelings for you
i'm lost and i don't know what to do
i'm shaking




Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2004-12-22 14:04:03]
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Re: Shaking (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:34:06 PM AEST
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so yeah why were u shaken?u know ur way better then that,u know hes not worth anything and i was happy to hear that u were getting over him,then i heard that u cut ur wrist and now i hear that u still like him and whatever else,u got me so confused,u better be over him,love ya great write

cheech


Re: Shaking (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:56:03 PM AEST
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well was good was told if i knew everything id be confused hmmm im smart n ways lol get over him gurl u got me now cuttin sucks dont do it again or let me know bout it ill cut myself the right way good write love ya babe




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