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Array ( [sid] => 77041 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Whats Love Got To Do With It? [time] => 2004-12-23 16:31:49 [hometext] => Im only 14 so yes , i know i no nothing about love, but it is like a force is consuming me telling me what to write. That doesnt sound too crazy, does it? [bodytext] => Is this the end,
when was the start,
why are you doing this to me,
how can you break my heart?

Was there ever a time,
you realized my feelings for you,
I think now, you never knew,
this game was meant for two.

Did you never notice,
my lonely heartful glance,
did you never notice,
the way I watched you dance?

Now I realize,
it wasn't meant to be,
it was my fault to think,
that you were right for me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ell_03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Whats Love Got To Do With It?

Contributed by ell_03 on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:31:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Is this the end,
when was the start,
why are you doing this to me,
how can you break my heart?

Was there ever a time,
you realized my feelings for you,
I think now, you never knew,
this game was meant for two.

Did you never notice,
my lonely heartful glance,
did you never notice,
the way I watched you dance?

Now I realize,
it wasn't meant to be,
it was my fault to think,
that you were right for me.

Copyright © ell_03 ... [ 2004-12-23 16:31:49]
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Re: Whats Love Got To Do With It? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:40:33 PM AEST
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Yea, at 14 you don't really understand what love really is, but I know where you're coming from, because I've been there too. Anyway, this is a really good piece. You have a lot of potential :-)

Re: Whats Love Got To Do With It? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 06:02:34 PM AEST
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Very good write, young one. Keep writing, you portray your feelings very well.......Mike

Re: Whats Love Got To Do With It? (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 07:37:40 PM AEST
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I agree with Mike...
You have a great potential. Keep writing.

Very well done
Larry

Re: Whats Love Got To Do With It? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:58:30 PM AEST
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i loved this write. you wrote it so well. you might not know much about love, but you make it seem like you do. powerful ending also.

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