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Array ( [sid] => 77087 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All my heart is asking for [time] => 2004-12-23 23:25:58 [hometext] => This is just me writing a poem coz i feel down a bit i like alot i hope you all to even though the message in it is a bit hard to see well and thanx to pUnKa_RaCh her poems helped me write it [bodytext] => I can’t lie to you I can’t lie to my heart
You are all it’s asking for
So it won’t feel so torn apart
Every waking hour it wants you more

So I just

Close my eyes and it’s as if I have traveled back in time
And I am there again looking into your eyes and seeing mine

My dark eyes dance there in the clarity of your own kind shades
Of beauty truly like an endless sky filled with a light that can never fade

But my memories of you do not do for my heart what it should
They fade away; leave me even if I hold on to them as much as I could

Why is it that I can’t do what I want and
Why is it that we are so far apart I don’t understand?
I want to take you by your hand and kiss your
Kiss your broken skin and have it haunt me more

It’s just not fair

That we meet and fall yet to have so many things in the way of our destiny
Things that tear us apart when ever why try and get close things that want us to be empty

Empty shells with no happiness just filled with a suffering that kills our souls
Kills our souls so we wrought away and our bodies left with holes

Holes that once resonated with a shimmering glare of light
But that light has dimmed with out a heart to bear and that is not right

Because what use does a candle have if
The wick has burnt out before the candle melts
The wick can be replaced but it will still not be fully fixed
What use is having purpose if it is never met or felt?

My purpose is you

I don’t want you to be wasted on me but I love you and want you to love me
I see everything in need in your soul everything that can just set my heart free

You are the strength the beauty in my words the flow in my poetry
You will always be so amazing, more perfect to me than anyone can be


You are more than a thousand times my angel and my faith is in you
I have made my church in your eyes and that is the only temple I know is true
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All my heart is asking for

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 11:25:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I can’t lie to you I can’t lie to my heart
You are all it’s asking for
So it won’t feel so torn apart
Every waking hour it wants you more

So I just

Close my eyes and it’s as if I have traveled back in time
And I am there again looking into your eyes and seeing mine

My dark eyes dance there in the clarity of your own kind shades
Of beauty truly like an endless sky filled with a light that can never fade

But my memories of you do not do for my heart what it should
They fade away; leave me even if I hold on to them as much as I could

Why is it that I can’t do what I want and
Why is it that we are so far apart I don’t understand?
I want to take you by your hand and kiss your
Kiss your broken skin and have it haunt me more

It’s just not fair

That we meet and fall yet to have so many things in the way of our destiny
Things that tear us apart when ever why try and get close things that want us to be empty

Empty shells with no happiness just filled with a suffering that kills our souls
Kills our souls so we wrought away and our bodies left with holes

Holes that once resonated with a shimmering glare of light
But that light has dimmed with out a heart to bear and that is not right

Because what use does a candle have if
The wick has burnt out before the candle melts
The wick can be replaced but it will still not be fully fixed
What use is having purpose if it is never met or felt?

My purpose is you

I don’t want you to be wasted on me but I love you and want you to love me
I see everything in need in your soul everything that can just set my heart free

You are the strength the beauty in my words the flow in my poetry
You will always be so amazing, more perfect to me than anyone can be


You are more than a thousand times my angel and my faith is in you
I have made my church in your eyes and that is the only temple I know is true




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Re: All my heart is asking for (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 11:59:12 PM AEST
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my church in your eyes and that is the only temple I know is true

I like that dorien.. verry pretty.

Have you read this??

http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=76239


Re: All my heart is asking for (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 12:15:35 AM AEST
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Because what use does a candle have if
The wick has burnt out before the candle melts
The wick can be replaced but it will still not be fully fixed.
What use is having a purpose if it is never met of felt?

These words are so beautiful and yet so true. Great job.


Re: All my heart is asking for (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 12:49:31 AM AEST
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oh my goodness....thank you so much! its soo beautiful as always........very touching to me....thanku! im glad i inspired you


Re: All my heart is asking for (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 11:15:31 PM AEST
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thanks for writing this for me, it's really sweet and touching


Re: All my heart is asking for (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 11:42:36 AM AEST
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OOhh Another lovely one john, thank so much for this one, it was extremely inspirational...




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