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Array ( [sid] => 77098 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Xmas Eve [time] => 2004-12-24 02:56:21 [hometext] => Freestyle poetry. Comments? Come on do it! [bodytext] => I'm an idiot
I wish you would kill me

no one there
able to thrill me

I give it all
but nothing is there

what would it take
to make you to care

I've been out all night
away from your ego

I'm wondering why
you wont let me go

all I've done is change
wish that you will

instead you hide
behind the sleeping pill

I'm worn out
filled with drink

you should 've took the time
just to think

it's not all about you
on this xmas eve

I could stayed home
you've got on my nerve

I gave to give
but I find you ringless

all the words you've said
I realize are meanigless

my final cry
you'll never hear

I wish I was dead
You'll wish you were here [comments] => 3 [counter] => 294 [topic] => 6 [informant] => loyalist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Xmas Eve

Contributed by loyalist on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 02:56:21 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I'm an idiot
I wish you would kill me

no one there
able to thrill me

I give it all
but nothing is there

what would it take
to make you to care

I've been out all night
away from your ego

I'm wondering why
you wont let me go

all I've done is change
wish that you will

instead you hide
behind the sleeping pill

I'm worn out
filled with drink

you should 've took the time
just to think

it's not all about you
on this xmas eve

I could stayed home
you've got on my nerve

I gave to give
but I find you ringless

all the words you've said
I realize are meanigless

my final cry
you'll never hear

I wish I was dead
You'll wish you were here

Copyright © loyalist ... [ 2004-12-24 02:56:21]
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Re: Xmas Eve (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 03:14:35 AM AEST
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this is a interesting write but it is great also,be proud of yourself.
~keep the faith~
Bluebird

Re: Xmas Eve (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 03:18:10 AM AEST
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Yea.... xmas eve can be hard. Nice freestyle.

Re: Xmas Eve (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 07:26:11 PM AEST
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"my final cry
you'll never hear
I wish I was dead
You'll wish you were here"

I like that part a lot. Good poem.

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