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Array ( [sid] => 77196 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i miss you [time] => 2004-12-25 02:02:28 [hometext] => this is to my mom whom i barly knew she left me when i was 4 and i never saw her again [bodytext] => silent tears
stream down my face
to see my angel
falling from grace

crimson tide
sinfull fears
lovley angel
whom i held so dear

i tryed so hard
to stay in sanitys yard
never did my love ever fail
not even when you took me straight to hell

what did i do?
what could i say?
was i not good enough?
why coulden't i stay?

what dose it take to get a hug
me the child, you the mother
why did you leave me
and go have another?

i cry this night
in remembrance of you
when you walked away
my happiness went with you

merry christmas mom.....werever you are [comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 32 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
i miss you

Contributed by socialmisfit on Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 02:02:28 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



silent tears
stream down my face
to see my angel
falling from grace

crimson tide
sinfull fears
lovley angel
whom i held so dear

i tryed so hard
to stay in sanitys yard
never did my love ever fail
not even when you took me straight to hell

what did i do?
what could i say?
was i not good enough?
why coulden't i stay?

what dose it take to get a hug
me the child, you the mother
why did you leave me
and go have another?

i cry this night
in remembrance of you
when you walked away
my happiness went with you

merry christmas mom.....werever you are




Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2004-12-25 02:02:28]
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Re: i miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 02:26:35 AM AEST
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So sad but written well.
I could never imagene what this would be like but I'm so sorry and she may come back and find u.
No matter what it wasn't anything u did 'cause u was jus an innocent child.
May your wish come true.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy


Re: i miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by Loyalist on Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 03:24:28 AM AEST
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Powerful! When a poem you read brings a tear, you know it is good. Thanks for sharing your feelings in verse. Thanks for reading my opinion.




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