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Array ( [sid] => 77281 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Weak [time] => 2004-12-26 03:24:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I always wondered what was inside you,
inside that mind.
Lies, quilt, sorrow,
i shall find.
So pretty on the outside,
blue eyes that shine.
What pain will you now grind?
Have you ever looked in to me?
If you did, you can see
someone in desprate need ran threw me.
My mind and soul is shattered and cold;
a libary of events and stories
that havent been told.
Tears wanting to fall,
blood waiting to be shed,
their must be something you can recommend.
Stop hurting me day after day,
stop choosing the things you wish to say,
let me live my life,
and i will let you fullfil the crime.
The weak this time will survive. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Riot_Girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

The Weak

Contributed by Riot_Girl on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 03:24:34 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I always wondered what was inside you,
inside that mind.
Lies, quilt, sorrow,
i shall find.
So pretty on the outside,
blue eyes that shine.
What pain will you now grind?
Have you ever looked in to me?
If you did, you can see
someone in desprate need ran threw me.
My mind and soul is shattered and cold;
a libary of events and stories
that havent been told.
Tears wanting to fall,
blood waiting to be shed,
their must be something you can recommend.
Stop hurting me day after day,
stop choosing the things you wish to say,
let me live my life,
and i will let you fullfil the crime.
The weak this time will survive.

Copyright © Riot_Girl ... [ 2004-12-26 03:24:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Weak (User Rating: 1 )
by Loyalist on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:45:09 AM AEST
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What a welcome bit of poesy from a new comer! You must have been wrting for a while at least!? Very nice write and verse. I really liked how this one opened up. Thanks for reading my opinion.

Re: The Weak (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:44:57 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem Riot

Love Sweetangelukxxx

Re: The Weak (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 02:30:39 AM AEST
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"The weak this time will survive."
Powerful line to end a poem with. Good write.

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