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Take Me Away
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
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Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 11:51:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Take me away, away from here
For I hurt many in which I hold near
Send me off far, far away
For pain is only here to stay
Haul me away far away from sight
I have nothing left worth to fight
Drag me away from the place I call home
Ditch me somewhere allow me to roam
Today is the day youll see me last
Ill be known as the girl from only the past
For pain is all I ever brought
To be a knew me is what need be taught
Who knows I may return someday
But as for now I am on my way
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
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2004-12-26 11:51:03]
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Re: Take Me Away
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:19:01 PM AEST
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This is a very powerful poem...I like it. Keep it up.
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Re: Take Me Away
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:36:22 PM AEST
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This is really strong. I like it a lot. You're a talented writer, keep writing!
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Re: Take Me Away
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by justinblue on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 02:55:27 PM AEST
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| i really like your poem I like your way with words |
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