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Array ( [sid] => 77369 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fated Lovers [time] => 2004-12-27 10:10:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wanted more than Fate would give
Gifts withheld as if to taunt
Rob my senses and make me want
One more kiss and last embrace

Sweet words tumble from your lips
Steal my heart with affectionate kiss
And in your arms I find true bliss
Until we part at dawn’s first light

Tears upon my pillow fall
As sleep comes down upon my head
Fate mocks me in my lonely bed
Where you have deserted me again

The sun rises and sets on you
And when at last you come no more
No secret knock upon my door
I know the darkness of defeat
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Fated Lovers

Contributed by merry on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 10:10:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I wanted more than Fate would give
Gifts withheld as if to taunt
Rob my senses and make me want
One more kiss and last embrace

Sweet words tumble from your lips
Steal my heart with affectionate kiss
And in your arms I find true bliss
Until we part at dawn’s first light

Tears upon my pillow fall
As sleep comes down upon my head
Fate mocks me in my lonely bed
Where you have deserted me again

The sun rises and sets on you
And when at last you come no more
No secret knock upon my door
I know the darkness of defeat

Copyright Â© merry ... [ 2004-12-27 10:10:26]
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Re: Fated Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by prozac_memory on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:45:24 PM AEST
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..another great poem.
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Re: Fated Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:20:00 AM AEST
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This really is a very good write.

Re: Fated Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:44:13 PM AEST
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beautifully written, but oh sooo hauntingly sad.... big hugs n' love sis, nessa

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Re: Fated Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:10:34 PM AEST
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This one is sad, but of course, beautiful as most of your poems I have read are. "Gifts withheld as if to taunt" Boy don't I understand *that* line! Blessings!

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