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[sid] => 77413
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Last Good-Bye
[time] => 2004-12-27 18:29:11
[hometext] => My teacher told me about this one time he held a women’s body in his hands while she died with great description and inspired me to write this poem.
[bodytext] => Last Good-Bye: I shiver as a cold breeze hits my face I look around me, people seems to walk in a slow pace Suddenly a loud crash makes me feel lonely I yell, I scream desperately as my shouts echo slowly It's such a desperation that I'm not being heard Like a flour that won't bloom or a broken wing of a hopeless bird People rush pass me and form a circle, around what appears to be an accident I follow them, as I see my body lying on the floor My life has now been shut, no longer is it an open door I get past the crowd of people, easily, for I am now my own spirit Me, my body is brutally disfigured as if a thousand pounds laid upon it I bend down, and see my life flash through my eyes I rase my head towards the skies, hoping that God can hear my cries "Why?!" I yell "Why?!" I ask Why must my life be over, for I've done a good task Please my lord, please give a hand Let me live the life I wished to have Forgive my bad deeds Give me a chance and I'll help other peoples needs No, you say? I guess I understand For my destiny was written on stone sense the day I took my first breath And has followed through this terrible death Now I must leave, though I refuse and insist to stay These men shall take me away From this spot in which my body once laid As I say my final good-bye, tears roll down my cheeks My last bid is to see all of my loved ones, for this is what angels seek [comments] => 1 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Lurking_Shadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
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