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Array ( [sid] => 77560 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye forever more [time] => 2004-12-28 18:52:13 [hometext] => Pls leave comments! This is a poem about my ex..which took me more than 10 months to get over until yesterday which inspired me to write this poem [bodytext] => Last night I talked to you
Like we never had before
You were asking me what to do
You whom closed the door and left me all alone
How could you dare?
Why did I even care?
You did it before
How could I not be sure?
You never changed
Even if you did it would be too late
You and I were nothing more than a mistake
I don't know what I saw in you before
But this time I'm closing the door
To a love that was never there
Guys like you I just can't bare
Now it time for me to go
So goodbye to you forever more
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Goodbye forever more

Contributed by Gigi_15 on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 06:52:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Last night I talked to you
Like we never had before
You were asking me what to do
You whom closed the door and left me all alone
How could you dare?
Why did I even care?
You did it before
How could I not be sure?
You never changed
Even if you did it would be too late
You and I were nothing more than a mistake
I don't know what I saw in you before
But this time I'm closing the door
To a love that was never there
Guys like you I just can't bare
Now it time for me to go
So goodbye to you forever more

Copyright © Gigi_15 ... [ 2004-12-28 18:52:13]
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Re: Goodbye forever more (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 07:43:07 PM AEST
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i kinda felt this recently too, only less agressive. talkin to my ex, who ive always been very fond of, i suddenly realised i really didnt want much to do with her any more. it was strange and actually quite sad and kinda angry. so im glad this poem was around =)

Re: Goodbye forever more (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:00:44 PM AEST
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i felt this just a few weeks ago, it felt like he was the world, and id cry that we broke up, but then one day i woke up on the otherside of the bed, i didnt care for him at all anymore, i was the one that shut the door, so why should i feel bad for him, now im totally over him!! i know exactly what it s like tho!!keep writin' i luved ur poem~~chrissy~~

Re: Goodbye forever more (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:00:58 PM AEST
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i felt this just a few weeks ago, it felt like he was the world, and id cry that we broke up, but then one day i woke up on the otherside of the bed, i didnt care for him at all anymore, i was the one that shut the door, so why should i feel bad for him, now im totally over him!! i know exactly what it s like tho!!keep writin' i luved ur poem~~chrissy~~

Re: Goodbye forever more (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:40:58 PM AEST
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You whom closed the door and left me all alone

there's something about that line..I think it's the word whom.. but whatever it is..it diverted me from the rest of the poem...

Re: Goodbye forever more (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:43:09 PM AEST
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Nice.

Spazzo

Re: Goodbye forever more (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:15:07 PM AEST
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"But this time I'm closing the door
To a love that was never there"

Great lines. I like them.
Take care.
David

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