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Mistake
Contributed by
O7NeVeS
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:16:47 PM in AEST
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You say youre being honest, and not playing any games
If this is all true, why do I worry about other dames
I want to believe you, believe that youre true
But its so hard, when Im so unsure about you
I know you have a past, as well as many exes
And I know you wonder about me, talking to both sexes
But Ive been with you for a few weeks now
And all I can think about, is just one question How?
My gut tells me to believe you, and do it whole heartedly
But my mind tells me WARNING!- you may act cold heartedly
I will follow my heart, and not think otherwise
Because this is what prevents me, from talking to other guys
I say Im in no rush, for what may come to be
But I just cant wait, cant wait to see
Its hard to pace my feelings, especially when theyre racing
How do you feel, am I the only one thats chasing?
This is what I was thinking, way before
I will never think that way, ever more
My gut was wrong, I shouldve been listening
But thats entirely me, to dismiss my thinking
Thats just like you, you did what you could
I guess its all true, youre just that good
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O7NeVeS
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2004-12-28 21:16:47]
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Re: Mistake
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by blossomingcherry5353 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:24:46 PM AEST
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Wow!, that poem was written very well, and it was so emotional too. Hope everything goes well for you.
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Re: Mistake
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:33:35 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Nice flow. |
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Re: Mistake
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by Dec2three198five on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 10:30:55 PM AEST
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| I like the flow. poem is good. Keep writin. Henry33 |
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Re: Mistake
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 02:08:56 AM AEST
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i really liked the flow of this one, it just kept goin without a hitch..finally i poem with a happy ending :) wonderful work tanya!
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