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Array ( [sid] => 77590 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => November Rain [time] => 2004-12-28 23:12:47 [hometext] => been awhile since i wrote.hope u like it :-) [bodytext] => Raindrops trailing down the window,
Trickling to the green lawn below,
Watching the rain fall,
Ignoring the growing distant phone call.

The world can wait for me,
While I sit here in my reverie,
In my little corner by the window pane,
Enjoying the annual monsoon rain.

Hearing the clap of thunder,
Brings back acute feelings of wonder,
Across the garden I could see,
A soaked squirrel shivering atop a tree.

In the house across,little children giggled,
As they soaked themselves in the rain,
Beneath their bare feet,earthworm wriggled,
Finding their escape in the monsoon drain.

Heaven's tears fall gently down,
Washing away my weariness,
Ebbing away my my sadness,
Peace and contentment was found,
Away from the bustling cities and train,
Right here in the gentle November rain.

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November Rain

Contributed by Crimsonflame on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:12:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

Raindrops trailing down the window,
Trickling to the green lawn below,
Watching the rain fall,
Ignoring the growing distant phone call.

The world can wait for me,
While I sit here in my reverie,
In my little corner by the window pane,
Enjoying the annual monsoon rain.

Hearing the clap of thunder,
Brings back acute feelings of wonder,
Across the garden I could see,
A soaked squirrel shivering atop a tree.

In the house across,little children giggled,
As they soaked themselves in the rain,
Beneath their bare feet,earthworm wriggled,
Finding their escape in the monsoon drain.

Heaven's tears fall gently down,
Washing away my weariness,
Ebbing away my my sadness,
Peace and contentment was found,
Away from the bustling cities and train,
Right here in the gentle November rain.

Copyright © Crimsonflame ... [ 2004-12-28 23:12:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: November Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:25:31 PM AEST
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i love this bit
Heavens tears fall gently down.
beautiful.

~keepthefaith~
BB

Re: November Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:32:27 PM AEST
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I agree with Bluebird on the line:

"Heaven's tears fall gently down"

It's a beautiful way to think of it...

Re: November Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:39:19 PM AEST
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wow, you've done a great job of recapturing your memories and making them come alive. it made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.....well done. beautiful write

Re: November Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:19:39 AM AEST
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good poem i loved it

Re: November Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:37:20 AM AEST
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A very warm poem, writen with so much thought to it, good job.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: November Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:51:56 AM AEST
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Well it was worth the wait.
A very powerfull, tender, up lifting write.
Huggs, smiles, November rain,
emy

Re: November Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:19:27 AM AEST
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great rhymes, even better poem

Re: November Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 06:03:24 AM AEST
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a lovely write indeed
Crimsonflame
Inoc

Re: November Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 06:59:42 AM AEST
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awww that was so beautiful, really loved this :)
pixie xx

Re: November Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 06:33:04 AM AEST
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I miss rain so much.... We had a thunderstorm a few months ago, and I enjoyed it by taking a walk through the hills in my backyard... it was amazing!
Your poem was beautiful, it captured well the moment of "heaven tears" falling.
Take care.
David

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