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Array ( [sid] => 77594 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sinner [time] => 2004-12-28 23:49:16 [hometext] => COMMENTS WANTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [bodytext] => I'm outside of myself, looking directly in,
looking in my eyes, feeling my own skin.
I am perfect on the outside,
exactly what He desires.
but on the inside I'm cold as ice,
and my sins could ignite 100 fires.
Why did He go through so much, just to get
looked over?
Giving Him ignorance and then the cold shoulder.
Everynow and then, you'll go to church
and you'll pray,
but He wants you to be a conformist to Him,
not some unknown stray.
I'm holding my own hand,
wiping away my tears.
Telling myself that atleast Christ loves me,
then why do I still have fears?

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sinner

Contributed by rhea on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:49:16 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

I'm outside of myself, looking directly in,
looking in my eyes, feeling my own skin.
I am perfect on the outside,
exactly what He desires.
but on the inside I'm cold as ice,
and my sins could ignite 100 fires.
Why did He go through so much, just to get
looked over?
Giving Him ignorance and then the cold shoulder.
Everynow and then, you'll go to church
and you'll pray,
but He wants you to be a conformist to Him,
not some unknown stray.
I'm holding my own hand,
wiping away my tears.
Telling myself that atleast Christ loves me,
then why do I still have fears?

Copyright © rhea ... [ 2004-12-28 23:49:16]
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Re: sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:54:36 PM AEST
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wow, this was great! as a christian i can reltate to ur fears...sometimes we think God could never accept us beacause of all our sins....i think its called insecurity. this was an orginial write and i loved it!

Re: sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:06:26 AM AEST
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Great write.
God doesn't give us things in life that we can't handle. Nice job.

Re: sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:39:11 AM AEST
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Good write but me myself i dont go to church i believe thats all that counts

Re: sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:25:00 AM AEST
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We're only human and are over comers by faith, luv, mercy, grace-n-undying luv.
I don't do church either but definently know I'm jesus kid and a sinner.
Very thought provoking write.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:15:04 AM AEST
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A good poem. We are all sinners,but as long as the struggle is there, we are making progress.

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