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Array ( [sid] => 77600 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Do We Not Understand? [time] => 2004-12-29 01:50:07 [hometext] => this is my first poem that ive submited so comment on it please [bodytext] => It is sad that we are forced to fight
Do we have no common sense
Who told us that we have the right
To have battles and wars commence
We cannot just fight with others for fun
It will not be justified
While massacres that cannot be undone
And hate will long subside
When the last blow is struck or the last shot fired
When great leaders win in the end
They may get what was desired
But they cannot take back what was done
The blood they made others shed
And there great hunger for killing sprees
Has finally been fed [comments] => 7 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 43 [informant] => The_Callif [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Do We Not Understand?

Contributed by The_Callif on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:50:07 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

It is sad that we are forced to fight
Do we have no common sense
Who told us that we have the right
To have battles and wars commence
We cannot just fight with others for fun
It will not be justified
While massacres that cannot be undone
And hate will long subside
When the last blow is struck or the last shot fired
When great leaders win in the end
They may get what was desired
But they cannot take back what was done
The blood they made others shed
And there great hunger for killing sprees
Has finally been fed

Copyright © The_Callif ... [ 2004-12-29 01:50:07]
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Re: Do We Not Understand? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:58:47 AM AEST
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Welcome to our global family here at ypdc.
Very powerfull write.
Awesomely thought provoking.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Do We Not Understand? (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:22:55 AM AEST
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this was very relative to our times...we all think what purpose does war serve....uve captured it well. well done

Re: Do We Not Understand? (User Rating: 1 )
by lionels on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:32:26 AM AEST
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Not bad! :D You definetly have potentioll... keep at it!

I hate war!
Looks like you do to.

May peace be with all,
Lionel

Re: Do We Not Understand? (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:29:10 AM AEST
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This one spoke volumes to me. I would have listed this as political poetry. Very good write. Keep it up. Or, perhaps I should say, "bring 'em on."

Re: Do We Not Understand? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:34:58 PM AEST
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Great first write. I look forward to reading more from you. :-)

Re: Do We Not Understand? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty_cat on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:24:10 PM AEST
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very menacing, i like it. welcome, I think you'll like it here.

cat xx

Re: Do We Not Understand? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:43:42 AM AEST
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Very nice for your first write,I enjoyed it.
Welcome,and enjoy the site

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