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Depressed…I’m still spiraling down
This abyss in my mind just because
I’m broken, my last love is gone
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Dejected…I’m still falling down
That false hope you gave just because
You’ve detached, me from myself
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Condemned…to my personal darkness
You forced me here just because
You felt, you could never love me
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Inadequate…left feeling worthless
You brought it all on just because
You never considered how I’d feel
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Denied…to ever feel love again
It was your choice alone just because
You didn’t even break it off gently
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Committed…and left to feel nothing
You spilled the cold truth just because
I’m sure it was easier to write it down
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Trapped…in my own self pity
Forever this way just because
You’ve broken me to blindness
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Separated…my last hope is gone
I blame you for that just because
You used my last chance, threw it away
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Confined…to the darkest of holes
I’ll never get out just because
You buried my heart so cruelly
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Finally…you told me the truth
It had to be done just because
You lied all the times you were staying
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Joker17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

It Wasn't Almost Goodbye, It Was

Contributed by Joker17 on Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 06:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

“It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was” - by J. Samuelson Copyright©2001 01/21

Depressed…I’m still spiraling down
This abyss in my mind just because
I’m broken, my last love is gone
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Dejected…I’m still falling down
That false hope you gave just because
You’ve detached, me from myself
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Condemned…to my personal darkness
You forced me here just because
You felt, you could never love me
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Inadequate…left feeling worthless
You brought it all on just because
You never considered how I’d feel
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Denied…to ever feel love again
It was your choice alone just because
You didn’t even break it off gently
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Committed…and left to feel nothing
You spilled the cold truth just because
I’m sure it was easier to write it down
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Trapped…in my own self pity
Forever this way just because
You’ve broken me to blindness
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Separated…my last hope is gone
I blame you for that just because
You used my last chance, threw it away
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Confined…to the darkest of holes
I’ll never get out just because
You buried my heart so cruelly
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Finally…you told me the truth
It had to be done just because
You lied all the times you were staying
It Wasn’t Almost Goodbye, It Was.

Copyright Â© Joker17 ... [ 2002-12-01 18:30:00]
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Re: It Wasn't Almost Goodbye, It Was (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 06:45:57 PM AEST
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Thank you for writing this one to my ex LOL, this is EXACTLY how i feel all written up to a tee. Thanks for sharing this one it's definately a painful place to be sitting in when this happens to someone.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: It Wasn't Almost Goodbye, It Was (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 10:08:54 PM AEST
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I really like this one! I might contact you later about maybe printing it to send to someone I know.....*shaken smile* Very, very good!!

Re: It Wasn't Almost Goodbye, It Was (User Rating: 1 )
by Sumiko on Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 10:37:13 PM AEST
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Great work. Reading this put me back at a place of vulnerability; exactly where my ex-fiancee left me a year and a half ago. Even though I left him (b/c I wised up), I was still left at the end of the relationship feeling alot of the same emotions. Don't get me wrong, I hate feeling vulnerable, but it is a rare jewel of a poem that can bring out such feelings and emotions that I had burried for so long. I am very impressed

Re: It Wasn't Almost Goodbye, It Was (User Rating: 1 )
by spaceotter on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 07:40:46 AM AEST
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Great write!! I've felt the almost goodbye too many times in the last year. I hope the it was never comes. Beautifully written.

Re: It Wasn't Almost Goodbye, It Was (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 10:02:41 AM AEST
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Excellent write ... I can really relate to this. Great poem.

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