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Array ( [sid] => 77841 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My hero [time] => 2004-12-30 22:45:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => ~I think it sucks and that it doesnt rhyme or flow very well, but im gonna post it anyways~

~~This is for my Youth Group Leader who has had the biggest impact any one has ever had on my life~~

You were there when I needed you most,
Which is why I think were so close,

No matter what I do wrong,
Your still there for me,

Your the only one who believes in me,
and doesnt dought the stupid things I want to do,

You know how much I hate my dad,
So you try your best to be his subsitute,
And did I ever tell you what a great job your doing,

I have done so much to make you hate me,
But you look past it all at the fact that I need you,

I know I havent told you this but you are truly my hero,
and exactly who I want to be,

You dont know how much it meant to me,
When you said you felt like my dad and cared about me too,

You are the best person any one could know,
I am so lucky to have you in my life,

Thanks for all you've done and all I know you wil do!!

~I love you~

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My hero

Contributed by Hihocherio on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:45:35 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

~I think it sucks and that it doesnt rhyme or flow very well, but im gonna post it anyways~

~~This is for my Youth Group Leader who has had the biggest impact any one has ever had on my life~~

You were there when I needed you most,
Which is why I think were so close,

No matter what I do wrong,
Your still there for me,

Your the only one who believes in me,
and doesnt dought the stupid things I want to do,

You know how much I hate my dad,
So you try your best to be his subsitute,
And did I ever tell you what a great job your doing,

I have done so much to make you hate me,
But you look past it all at the fact that I need you,

I know I havent told you this but you are truly my hero,
and exactly who I want to be,

You dont know how much it meant to me,
When you said you felt like my dad and cared about me too,

You are the best person any one could know,
I am so lucky to have you in my life,

Thanks for all you've done and all I know you wil do!!

~I love you~

Copyright © Hihocherio ... [ 2004-12-30 22:45:35]
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Re: My hero (User Rating: 1 )
by Hihocherio on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 11:02:14 PM AEST
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Please Commment or rate my poem! I want to know if its good or not, and if people like what I write.
Thanks in advance if you if do comment or rate!

Re: My hero (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 03:27:59 PM AEST
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I think this is very special and a very beautiful write.....It doesn't have to rhyme...it's great as it is....straight from the heart....
Welcome to YPDC...
Jenni

Re: My hero (User Rating: 1 )
by In2thetwilightzone on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:17:31 PM AEST
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wow that was brilliant, excellent, im glad you have a father figure xxxxxxxxxxxjazzxxxxxxxxxxx

Re: My hero (User Rating: 1 )
by Greg_Skellington on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 02:41:43 PM AEST
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it was alright, woot woot....i like Suffer

Re: My hero (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 11:42:09 AM AEST
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That is a wonderfuly sweet poem. A very nice tribute. Everyone should have someone that they can come to and look up to and you are lucky to have him as mucha s he is lucky to have you. Poems don't have to rhyme. That was excellent. You have a great talent for expressing your feelings.

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