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Array ( [sid] => 77864 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A note [time] => 2004-12-31 02:08:17 [hometext] => I was soo high when I wrote this [bodytext] => Hey,
I feel really bad asking you for this but I must...I haven't had it in soo
long....I can already tast it in my mouth...going in soft and getting harded
and hared as I play with it with my toung and pull it in
and out of my mouth with my fingers...I can tast the worderfull thick jucies
sliding down my throght.....like I said I feel really bad asking you for this but I must...sooooooo............................................................
......................................
..............................................
could I have a peice of gum? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 7 [informant] => spyke_420 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

A note

Contributed by spyke_420 on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 02:08:17 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

Hey,
I feel really bad asking you for this but I must...I haven't had it in soo
long....I can already tast it in my mouth...going in soft and getting harded
and hared as I play with it with my toung and pull it in
and out of my mouth with my fingers...I can tast the worderfull thick jucies
sliding down my throght.....like I said I feel really bad asking you for this but I must...sooooooo............................................................
......................................
..............................................
could I have a peice of gum?

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Re: A note (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:48:39 AM AEST
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What the f***?
I hope to god you were really high when you wrote this s***.
Gum doesn't get hard or even "harded" or "hared".
This *****es me off cause it doesn't make any f***ng sense.
If you're going to make a sexual innuendo do it right.
>=/

Re: A note (User Rating: 1 )
by Blackevar on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:48:47 AM AEST
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Excellent, you should smoke more!

Re: A note (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:55:57 AM AEST
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this was funny! i liked it n yer i agree lol u should smoke more. well done

Re: A note (User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:08:06 AM AEST
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lol i kinda agree with everyone else so far... it was erm... interesting, yet funny, but it didn't make much sense... then again we can't really blame you for its faults, as you stated, you were high lol

-Nicki

Re: A note (User Rating: 1 )
by blueeyedevil13 on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 11:09:08 AM AEST
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rofl, since i havent had it in soo long... i was like o.O what do YOU want!! hehe shows just how much of a sick mind i have. LOL good job. get high more.

Re: A note (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 12:08:08 PM AEST
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I usually read dark poetry and never humorous poetry,but this caught my eye,for I have been high {in the past} and wanted to see what level someone else thinks on when they're high anyways I thought this was cute,who gives a ***** about a little bit of typos, it happens,it made me laugh.

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