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no limit to catastrophe
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:01:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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what makes your portrait so beautiful
when you lack a smile
when your eyes are screaming for salvation
the most touching words make you cry
and burn inside
take off that face
smiles dont deceive me anymore
its rough in every direction
i cant look away
everyone is struggling
dying
the most beautiful girl tears up her skin
she hates who she is
the richest man would throw his money away
for a feeling that he cannot name
a feeling that we all crave
were bleeding
burning
and dying for
everyone is suffering
for every reason
everyone lives a tragedy.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2005-01-01 21:01:12]
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Re: no limit to catastrophe
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:12:32 PM AEST
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| Very cool. I liked it. (^_^)v |
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Re: no limit to catastrophe
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:16:45 PM AEST
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This is good. And unfortunately true.
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Re: no limit to catastrophe
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:43:52 PM AEST
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| Yes, life can be a tragedy if we let it. Everyone sufferes bad times and deep hurt in their lives, but we do not have to let it destroy us and keep us at the bottom. We can fight our way back up and make life close to the way we want it. We just have to want it bad enough. Dove |
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Re: no limit to catastrophe
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 01:32:07 AM AEST
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Very powerfull masterpeice.
Awesomely true.
hugg, smiles, luv,
emy |
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Re: no limit to catastrophe
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:05:02 PM AEST
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This is a very wise poem and I really liked
the imagery at the start. To put it bluntly this
was simply an awesome write. I loved it.
Bobo (Joel) |
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