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a fuss
Contributed by
me
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:44:00 PM in AEST
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so much fuss
for one moment
of certainty
just for an answer
and always
i spin
and spin
and return
to the beginning
again
so much fuss
didn't i know
i was just dancing?
so much fuss
could have been music
so many useless words
could have been lyrics
to accompany
the fuss i was making
while always spinning
the fuss
never gave me
certainty
and i still have
no answer
i still make a fuss
but i suspect
it might be my way
of making music
making dance
becoming eternal
in the spinning
of a fuss
called life
aug 12/04
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2005-01-02 15:44:00]
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Re: a fuss
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 06:17:14 PM AEST
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very troubled poem. although it is nice to read
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Re: a fuss
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by PuppyChow on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:22:01 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem. its words alone mean nothing yet everything until the reader incorporates their own point of view into it . im wondering exactly what you wanted this poem to say? but i like it. email me if you would like to share this info. |
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