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A Tragic Car Accident
Contributed by
inoc
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Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:44:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The heat scorches her back
like a radiator on fire
Her hat is faded nearby and her drink is
standing oh so close to that electric fence wire
Why can't she reach it
she only has to stretch an inch
I never noticed that her foot was caught
and it's bleeding, and gee what is that stinch?
I myself only now realise -we both must look a sight
Our car is a wreck
and I can't remember what happened last night?
There's ants crawling over my bloody body
My friend layes ever so still
I want to call out to her as my voice
is like a flat battery in a powered drill
All I can do is pray that she is okay
where is somebody to help us
we need help right now, today
As I lay here swetting like a pig
I drift off to a blank dark sky
Time ticks by as I lay here beside my wig
Copyright ©
inoc
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2005-01-02 22:44:10]
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Re: A Tragic Car Accident
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:48:32 PM AEST
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| Wow |
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Re: A Tragic Car Accident
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:37:51 AM AEST
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| wow is right. |
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Re: A Tragic Car Accident
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by pixie on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:32:23 AM AEST
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that was so very powerful and moving, tragicly written ,
pixie xx |
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Re: A Tragic Car Accident
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:56:12 PM AEST
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tragiclaly graphic, what ever your suffering i wish u a gentle recovery, definatly an esential peice of writting, again i wish u well . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: A Tragic Car Accident
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 12:52:05 PM AEST
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A dreadfully scary write....all too real a possibility!
I hope it never happens either! |
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Re: A Tragic Car Accident
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by Dreama on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 11:27:13 AM AEST
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accidents seem to be a theme of late!
powerful write! interesting topic to choose!
peace, love and light
Pete |
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