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By Katherine Faigen

The River of Purpose sweeps me downstream
And endless words pour through my submerged head
I am left stronger, things are as they seem

Pull girls! Together we work as a team
Words in the water are those that I said
The River of Purpose sweeps me downstream

Get angry girls, we're building up steam
Tonight I fall, passing out into bed
I am left stronger, things are as they seem

I'm at a desk, information I glean
And words fall onto the paper instead
The River of Purpose sweeps me downstream

Into the ocean, where all of my dreams
Become endless words, soon tired and dead
I am left stronger, things are as they seem

Until I change them, and the words scream
Run Girls! And into the water I fled
The River of Purpose sweeps me downstream
I am left stronger, things are as they seem [comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SeptChill [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Work, Words, and Water

Contributed by SeptChill on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:41:08 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

WORK, WORDS, AND WATER
By Katherine Faigen

The River of Purpose sweeps me downstream
And endless words pour through my submerged head
I am left stronger, things are as they seem

Pull girls! Together we work as a team
Words in the water are those that I said
The River of Purpose sweeps me downstream

Get angry girls, we're building up steam
Tonight I fall, passing out into bed
I am left stronger, things are as they seem

I'm at a desk, information I glean
And words fall onto the paper instead
The River of Purpose sweeps me downstream

Into the ocean, where all of my dreams
Become endless words, soon tired and dead
I am left stronger, things are as they seem

Until I change them, and the words scream
Run Girls! And into the water I fled
The River of Purpose sweeps me downstream
I am left stronger, things are as they seem

Copyright © SeptChill ... [ 2005-01-03 13:41:08]
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Re: Work, Words, and Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:09:05 PM AEST
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well i think i was going with the flow of it, and not even trying to make sense of it. this is a pretty good poem. well worked format. but the repetition of words for rhymes becomes dull. this was a very original poem. different than i expected.

Re: Work, Words, and Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:07:52 PM AEST
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Interesting write. I like it.

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