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Array ( [sid] => 78306 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => From Love’s Highest Peak [time] => 2005-01-03 17:23:58 [hometext] => I know very little about love yet I have a lifetime of knowledge about the pain of love... [bodytext] => My heart, now only an empty shell-
From love’s highest peak, it has fell-
Left alone, forgotten and cold-
No emotions left for it to hold…

Gone now, the gentle touch of your hand-
That which fed the fire of my hearts demand-
A forgotten pleasure placed upon my skin-
One, which I feel that I may never know again…

Lost now, the sweet taste of your kiss-
A delight which I will forevermore miss-
And likewise the smile that came my way-
When you and I met on that long ago day…

Tears that once fell in endless number-
Now only return within my deepest slumber-
For only in my sleep does your memory return-
Allowing my hearts lost flame once again to burn…

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From Love’s Highest Peak

Contributed by hoist1atca on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 05:23:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

My heart, now only an empty shell-
From love’s highest peak, it has fell-
Left alone, forgotten and cold-
No emotions left for it to hold…

Gone now, the gentle touch of your hand-
That which fed the fire of my hearts demand-
A forgotten pleasure placed upon my skin-
One, which I feel that I may never know again…

Lost now, the sweet taste of your kiss-
A delight which I will forevermore miss-
And likewise the smile that came my way-
When you and I met on that long ago day…

Tears that once fell in endless number-
Now only return within my deepest slumber-
For only in my sleep does your memory return-
Allowing my hearts lost flame once again to burn…

Copyright © hoist1atca ... [ 2005-01-03 17:23:58]
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Re: From Love’s Highest Peak (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 05:37:07 PM AEST
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It bothers me that you used the word fell..when the tense should be fallen.. but I won't complain.. I have a tendency to want everything to be perfect when my own work is far from it.. I see a really good poem like this? I start re-wording and playing with it 'cause it's fun...

Re: From Love’s Highest Peak (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:04:18 PM AEST
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loved the poem (you can use fell, its poetic liscense - its about the poetry not the grammar) very emotive :) katie xx

Re: From Love’s Highest Peak (User Rating: 1 )
by travisk on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:19:36 PM AEST
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feeling that one bud

no problems just smooth emotion within the lines

Re: From Love’s Highest Peak (User Rating: 1 )
by Blu on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:15:45 PM AEST
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Very nice. I know all too well what you mean. Creativity isn't something that is bound by the laws of grammar or spelling. Just ask Emily Dickinson (yes, I know she's dead :)~ ). Good write.

Blu

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