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Array ( [sid] => 78370 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sick Of it All! [time] => 2005-01-04 00:50:16 [hometext] => dedicated to that pathetic excuse for a human being,,,,this is for anyone whos been hurt by the one they love...keep ur chin up! [bodytext] => I just want you to know,
Im sick of being sad over you,
Im gonna stop the pain,
My lonesome days are thru
You don’t deserve a *****in thing from me,
Not a single smile or my heart,
How would you like it
If I ripped your feelings apart!
I wish I could grab your worthless head,
And smash it against a brick wall,
Make you see how you made me feel,
How I felt so *****in small!

Here I was waiting for you,
I thought you really wanted me,
But with disregard you blew me off,
Then I began to finally see
You were just messing around,
Just pretending, you didn’t care!
Left me hanging on a string,
How could you *****in dare!

I did have feelings you know
You think id be happy you were with her?
Well now I don’t *****in give a *****
To be away from you I prefer!
Im sick of the way you look at me,
In fact don’t bother to look my way,
You’re not getting anything from me,
Im not gonna let you play
So go back to that little thing,
You call a girlfriend,
Shes a bloody kid compared to me,
Best of *****in wishes I send

Im sick of thinking about you,
You’re in my mind no more,
You’re a jerk, you’re nothing,
Like *****in dirt to me on the floor
Im sick of how I cant trust you,
One minute you want me then you don’t,
How stupid do you think I am?
To run back to run I wont!

Im sick of sitting in the corner,
Wallowing over what I lost,
Well now its your turn,
Look at what your selfishness has cost
Im sick of wasting these tears on you,
Your not worthy of my pain,
So goodbye and so long boy,
I hope I never see you again!

See im stronger than I look
I wont be broken so easily
So don’t flatter yourself,
You mean *****in nothing to me
So im letting you know,
I’m really angry, no longer sad
You should be in misery,
Because you’re missing out real bad!
Im sick of all this,
Im done with you and wont look back,
I smile because you’ll be gone soon,
My world’s no longer black.
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Sick Of it All!

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 12:50:16 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I just want you to know,
Im sick of being sad over you,
Im gonna stop the pain,
My lonesome days are thru
You don’t deserve a *****in thing from me,
Not a single smile or my heart,
How would you like it
If I ripped your feelings apart!
I wish I could grab your worthless head,
And smash it against a brick wall,
Make you see how you made me feel,
How I felt so *****in small!

Here I was waiting for you,
I thought you really wanted me,
But with disregard you blew me off,
Then I began to finally see
You were just messing around,
Just pretending, you didn’t care!
Left me hanging on a string,
How could you *****in dare!

I did have feelings you know
You think id be happy you were with her?
Well now I don’t *****in give a *****
To be away from you I prefer!
Im sick of the way you look at me,
In fact don’t bother to look my way,
You’re not getting anything from me,
Im not gonna let you play
So go back to that little thing,
You call a girlfriend,
Shes a bloody kid compared to me,
Best of *****in wishes I send

Im sick of thinking about you,
You’re in my mind no more,
You’re a jerk, you’re nothing,
Like *****in dirt to me on the floor
Im sick of how I cant trust you,
One minute you want me then you don’t,
How stupid do you think I am?
To run back to run I wont!

Im sick of sitting in the corner,
Wallowing over what I lost,
Well now its your turn,
Look at what your selfishness has cost
Im sick of wasting these tears on you,
Your not worthy of my pain,
So goodbye and so long boy,
I hope I never see you again!

See im stronger than I look
I wont be broken so easily
So don’t flatter yourself,
You mean *****in nothing to me
So im letting you know,
I’m really angry, no longer sad
You should be in misery,
Because you’re missing out real bad!
Im sick of all this,
Im done with you and wont look back,
I smile because you’ll be gone soon,
My world’s no longer black.




Copyright © pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-01-04 00:50:16]
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Re: Sick Of it All! (User Rating: 1 )
by maxi_waxi on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 01:05:40 AM AEST
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holy whack, that poem is crazy good. I started grinding my teeth with hatred while I read it. That was definently nicely written


Re: Sick Of it All! (User Rating: 1 )
by subnet_spider on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 01:44:42 AM AEST
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Good write, I really felt all that anger you have.


Re: Sick Of it All! (User Rating: 1 )
by krazykat05 on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:36:09 AM AEST
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Heya, I like this alot. Angry poetry is always the best because it can bring out the best in people sometimes with their ability to articulate their experiences. I also thnk the unusula rhyme scheme is impressive beacuse it seems to reflect the mood of the poem- at some points the rhyming couplets show a person who want's to conform and at others the distinction between the rhymes show a form of rebellion- both of which are prominant within real feelings of betrayal and anger. Anyway anough of my woffle- its kool. I would really appreciate if u could read my poem 'Fevous embrace' coz I'm new here and would love some comments to help me out! thanks!


Re: Sick Of it All! (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:58:13 AM AEST
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most amazing anger poetry ive read in a long long time....hope u can let go now...

Love,

Umang.


Re: Sick Of it All! (User Rating: 1 )
by Riot_Girl on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 12:26:34 PM AEST
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great poem, it reminds me so much of my ex, and i really likes this part: Im sick of sitting in the corner,
Wallowing over what I lost,
Well now its your turn,
Look at what your selfishness has cost

i can really feel your pain and emotion through this poem, nice write, keep writing and i'll keep reading :)


Re: Sick Of it All! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:36:27 PM AEST
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Great write... this was such a good poem... u expressed ur emotions so well...
hope to c more from u soon...

Jishes




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