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Corner of My Mind
Contributed by
Lee
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:55:13 PM in AEST
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No Fuss Gus:
I caught a bit of sky
In the corner of my eye
It's trapped now
And can't get out if it should try
Seeing the world
Through different scenes
So it seems
This could be the land
Of make-believe
I caught a bit of sky
Off guard
In the corner of my mind...
Copyright ©
Lee
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2005-01-04 19:55:13]
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Re: Corner of My Mind
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:43:51 PM AEST
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| captivating. all of the random pieces put together just makes sense for some reason. |
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Re: Corner of My Mind
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by wray on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:54:23 AM AEST
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| Ooh cute little piece. I think I've caught several dozen too many bits of sky in my eyes. I like your random rhyming scheme, also quite cute so it suits the poem. |
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Re: Corner of My Mind
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by stuart60677 on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 08:21:35 AM AEST
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| its good, could be longer though |
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