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Three Dreams
Contributed by
Steeleyes
on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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two streamlined whizz
gizmos horizontal flying
screen shapes city spires
glass metal shine
faster arc... voooooooow!
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swooped out & swirled over
arcing the arc way out
jungle greens & sky blue
and mountains grey & ragged
rollercoaster bodyless way out wide
exhileration sirens wailing
ecstatic bliss heart beating
round and round we go
in pure clear no-time
of being free, just me
--
green cat woman
inspects
parade of dreamers
eyes each one
'Hey this one's awake!'
dream ends
Copyright ©
Steeleyes
... [
2002-12-03 00:00:00]
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Re: Three Dreams
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vigilante006 on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 08:38:37 PM AEST
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| I liked the tone, it gives one a feeling of...woosh lol. But there was something about it that just wasn't clicking... |
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