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Array ( [sid] => 7861 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Its Over [time] => 2002-12-03 01:00:00 [hometext] => this written for friend, from his point of view as I see it. from what he says and what i see.
its kind of a song. [bodytext] => I don't know
Why
I'm still here
With you
The world
Is sayin'
Its over
And I know
Its true
I say it too
But yet
I'm here.

Can't say
Its over
Something keeps me here
I don't know
What it is
But
Its fading
And I'm leaving
Looking at my other options
Cause its over
Can't we face it
Say goodbye
And go on
No
Why can't we
Why can't I
Just say
Its over.

I thought
Of a million ways
To tell you
It over
The sex was bad
Its not you
Its me
But it is you
And it isn't me
And it isn't workin'
And maybe
One day
It will
But not
Now
But
I can't
I can't
For some reason
I can say its over
But
I can't end it.

Can't say
Its over
Something keeps me here
I don't know
What it is
But
Its fading
And I'm leaving
Looking at my other options
Cause its over
Can't we face it
Say goodbye
And go on
No
Why can't we
Why can't I
Just say
Its over.

I'm movin'
You're gonna turn trick
It'll end worse
If we don't end it now
You'll drink
And have sex
Creep with
Some other guy
And not even tell me
And
I'll scream
And yell
And maybe cry
Cause
You hurt me
Alot more
That way
But we
Won't let it end
We sugar coat
Problems.

I don't trust you
And you don't trust me
I get jealous
So
Do you
I'm in love
With you
Or I was
And you just
Always
Loved me
Never were in love
But
The words
Don't process
Cause
We don't want
To listen
And see
What
The world sees
But
We do
And pretend
We don't.

No more sugar coating
Straight up
Breakin' up
Me and you
No longer
Kiss me goodbye
Its not working
Its not you
But
It is you
And we can be friends
Wouldn't it be so awesome
If
We weren't together.

Together
Breakin' up now
Third time
Wasn't a charm
Didn't change
And grow
Just the
Same old
Same old
*****
Over
And over
Again.

I don't know
Can't say
Its over
Why
Something keeps me here
I don't know
What it is
But
I'm here
And
Its fading
And I'm leaving
I'm movin'
You're gonna turn trick
So I'm
Looking at my other options
Cause its over
Can't we face it
Can't trust you
Can't trust me
It goes both ways
Say goodbye
Cause
Jealous games
Go on
No
No longer
Why can't we
Why can't I
Third time
Wasn't a charm
On
And on
Blah blah blah
Now you talk
Now that its ending
I can't shut you up
But
You can't
And I can't
Just say
Its over
Bye bye
Walk away
Go home
On Friday
We'll party with Matt
But we're over
Can't we just say it
I can't
But
I want to
Don't you
No longer worth fighting for
Nothing left
But
Goodbye
Adios amigo
Au revior
Its over
Over
Like fifteen minutes
Ago
So yesterdays
News
And so
Go on
I'm gonna say it
I
I
I
I
I
I
I can't.
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Its Over

Contributed by ml02 on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I don't know
Why
I'm still here
With you
The world
Is sayin'
Its over
And I know
Its true
I say it too
But yet
I'm here.

Can't say
Its over
Something keeps me here
I don't know
What it is
But
Its fading
And I'm leaving
Looking at my other options
Cause its over
Can't we face it
Say goodbye
And go on
No
Why can't we
Why can't I
Just say
Its over.

I thought
Of a million ways
To tell you
It over
The sex was bad
Its not you
Its me
But it is you
And it isn't me
And it isn't workin'
And maybe
One day
It will
But not
Now
But
I can't
I can't
For some reason
I can say its over
But
I can't end it.

Can't say
Its over
Something keeps me here
I don't know
What it is
But
Its fading
And I'm leaving
Looking at my other options
Cause its over
Can't we face it
Say goodbye
And go on
No
Why can't we
Why can't I
Just say
Its over.

I'm movin'
You're gonna turn trick
It'll end worse
If we don't end it now
You'll drink
And have sex
Creep with
Some other guy
And not even tell me
And
I'll scream
And yell
And maybe cry
Cause
You hurt me
Alot more
That way
But we
Won't let it end
We sugar coat
Problems.

I don't trust you
And you don't trust me
I get jealous
So
Do you
I'm in love
With you
Or I was
And you just
Always
Loved me
Never were in love
But
The words
Don't process
Cause
We don't want
To listen
And see
What
The world sees
But
We do
And pretend
We don't.

No more sugar coating
Straight up
Breakin' up
Me and you
No longer
Kiss me goodbye
Its not working
Its not you
But
It is you
And we can be friends
Wouldn't it be so awesome
If
We weren't together.

Together
Breakin' up now
Third time
Wasn't a charm
Didn't change
And grow
Just the
Same old
Same old
*****
Over
And over
Again.

I don't know
Can't say
Its over
Why
Something keeps me here
I don't know
What it is
But
I'm here
And
Its fading
And I'm leaving
I'm movin'
You're gonna turn trick
So I'm
Looking at my other options
Cause its over
Can't we face it
Can't trust you
Can't trust me
It goes both ways
Say goodbye
Cause
Jealous games
Go on
No
No longer
Why can't we
Why can't I
Third time
Wasn't a charm
On
And on
Blah blah blah
Now you talk
Now that its ending
I can't shut you up
But
You can't
And I can't
Just say
Its over
Bye bye
Walk away
Go home
On Friday
We'll party with Matt
But we're over
Can't we just say it
I can't
But
I want to
Don't you
No longer worth fighting for
Nothing left
But
Goodbye
Adios amigo
Au revior
Its over
Over
Like fifteen minutes
Ago
So yesterdays
News
And so
Go on
I'm gonna say it
I
I
I
I
I
I
I can't.




Copyright © ml02 ... [ 2002-12-03 01:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Its Over (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 01:37:26 AM AEST
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Ah geez all that and then at the end it says ......."i cant" lol...i liked that i enjoyed reading this one thanks for sharing it..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Its Over (User Rating: 1 )
by plous on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 10:16:53 PM AEST
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wow, that felt like someone was chokeing me.


Re: Its Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 08:02:35 PM AEST
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This was a long ass poem but i loved it! It went trhoug hm y lst relastionship exactly and even the last sentence ws real! Darn loving some one soo much you can' t let them go!!




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