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Array ( [sid] => 78614 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Rollercoaster [time] => 2005-01-05 18:03:58 [hometext] => Long, but you really feel the darkness of the ride, but i wrote it a long time ago so its not as put together as i want it to be.. but i'll post it as its orginal form and plz tell me what ya think, thanks :) [bodytext] => Enter.
My world of destruction,
my cycle of pain.
This thing that tears you,
Down this dark lane.
Tears are frozen,
an object in time,
each one is a bit of your heart,
bleeding from your eyes.
Blood is stained
on our soft skin
To remind us
that we can never win.
Love is feared
And so is fate,
we would like to have it
But it is to late.
Rain pours everywhere
Like a waterfall,
So we all sink, we never swim
Because our lives are far to dim.
Smiles are secretly kept
In safes with locks.
No one uses them
Like broken clocks.
Faith is a hope,
but it is blurred.
When we hear it,
We glare and stir.
Black make up is a tradition,
It is used everyday
To cover up that happiness
And those pretty faces.
We try to breathe
We try hard to feel,
But we know
That we are not real.
Light peaks through the cracks of stone,
We want to touch it
but it would burn our flesh,
for only it is darkness
that we can catch.
Each twist and turn
Rips you apart side to side
Because you cannot hide.
Cries and screams are all you hear,
They are imbedded
Into your skin
Reminding you of your unforgiving sins.
Each scream,
Each cry,
Makes you cry,
Each tear,
Is like a flame.
When it hits your skin
It burns through
Making it true
That your life
Is through.
Exit.
The ride is over,
The coaster is empty,
I am the only one riding it
And the bars are heavy.
They wont let me out
Of this nightmare I’m in
So it starts,
And I ride it again.
I watch all my events
That have already taken place
I feel the pain and the misery again.
There is nothing now to cure my case.
I sit back,
And go though my ride again
I hope this time maybe
I will come to a dead end.
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My Rollercoaster

Contributed by Riot_Girl on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:03:58 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Enter.
My world of destruction,
my cycle of pain.
This thing that tears you,
Down this dark lane.
Tears are frozen,
an object in time,
each one is a bit of your heart,
bleeding from your eyes.
Blood is stained
on our soft skin
To remind us
that we can never win.
Love is feared
And so is fate,
we would like to have it
But it is to late.
Rain pours everywhere
Like a waterfall,
So we all sink, we never swim
Because our lives are far to dim.
Smiles are secretly kept
In safes with locks.
No one uses them
Like broken clocks.
Faith is a hope,
but it is blurred.
When we hear it,
We glare and stir.
Black make up is a tradition,
It is used everyday
To cover up that happiness
And those pretty faces.
We try to breathe
We try hard to feel,
But we know
That we are not real.
Light peaks through the cracks of stone,
We want to touch it
but it would burn our flesh,
for only it is darkness
that we can catch.
Each twist and turn
Rips you apart side to side
Because you cannot hide.
Cries and screams are all you hear,
They are imbedded
Into your skin
Reminding you of your unforgiving sins.
Each scream,
Each cry,
Makes you cry,
Each tear,
Is like a flame.
When it hits your skin
It burns through
Making it true
That your life
Is through.
Exit.
The ride is over,
The coaster is empty,
I am the only one riding it
And the bars are heavy.
They wont let me out
Of this nightmare I’m in
So it starts,
And I ride it again.
I watch all my events
That have already taken place
I feel the pain and the misery again.
There is nothing now to cure my case.
I sit back,
And go though my ride again
I hope this time maybe
I will come to a dead end.

Copyright Â© Riot_Girl ... [ 2005-01-05 18:03:58]
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Re: My Rollercoaster (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:18:17 PM AEST
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excellent dark write, well written. Well expressed keep it up

Re: My Rollercoaster (User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:12:07 PM AEST
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So many feelings condensed and suspended in one paragraph. Nothing short of amazing, Great write.

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