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Array ( [sid] => 78629 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Broken Hearted Gallows [time] => 2005-01-05 19:23:22 [hometext] => Something about betrayal and the effects it has on the party betrayed [bodytext] => He slipped the rope ‘round her neck
Ignoring the sound of reason, intellect
She looked straight ahead and felt not a thing
Formed a bond of love with a chain link ring
A blue diamond tear fell as he pulled it tight
Sinners are the only ones who’ll never know wrong from right

She looked oh so supreme in her black leather boots
The sickly riches and temptations of Armani birthday suits
Stared into his eyes and saw the bloody dagger’s reflection
But we thought it a thing past him, this song of deception
Didn’t know he was still addicted to a perversion so vicious
A crime so precious to him, a sinfully sore sickness…

When she fell, a crack could be heard from miles afar
Her neck or her heart we could never be sure
She knows what you did, she knows where you are
A murder so sweetly couture
And its all your fault…..its all your fault.

And when night fell, he whispered love to her and lied
The stars long to tell, the tale of crimson fabrics tied
Round her tender ankles, binding, teasing, and screaming
Loving all the attention …fearing the end of all the dreaming

When she fell, a crack could be heard from miles afar
Her neck or her heart we could never be sure
She knows what you did, she knows where you are
A murder so sweetly couture
And its all your fault…all your fault

A betrayal, a wrongdoing, a suspect and all
Went completely unseen behind Aquarius walls
Hidden crimes and records forged
Stains of blood and transparent gloves worn

And still they don’t know (And still they don’t know)
And still they don’t see (and still they don’t see)
The blood in the snow (the blood in the snow)
The unfaithful disease (this unfaithful disease)

When she fell, a crack could be heard from miles afar
Her neck or her heart we could never be sure
She knows what you did, she knows where you are
A murder so seemingly couture
And its all your fault…and its all your fault
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The Broken Hearted Gallows

Contributed by darkplaidbabe on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:23:22 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



He slipped the rope ‘round her neck
Ignoring the sound of reason, intellect
She looked straight ahead and felt not a thing
Formed a bond of love with a chain link ring
A blue diamond tear fell as he pulled it tight
Sinners are the only ones who’ll never know wrong from right

She looked oh so supreme in her black leather boots
The sickly riches and temptations of Armani birthday suits
Stared into his eyes and saw the bloody dagger’s reflection
But we thought it a thing past him, this song of deception
Didn’t know he was still addicted to a perversion so vicious
A crime so precious to him, a sinfully sore sickness…

When she fell, a crack could be heard from miles afar
Her neck or her heart we could never be sure
She knows what you did, she knows where you are
A murder so sweetly couture
And its all your fault…..its all your fault.

And when night fell, he whispered love to her and lied
The stars long to tell, the tale of crimson fabrics tied
Round her tender ankles, binding, teasing, and screaming
Loving all the attention …fearing the end of all the dreaming

When she fell, a crack could be heard from miles afar
Her neck or her heart we could never be sure
She knows what you did, she knows where you are
A murder so sweetly couture
And its all your fault…all your fault

A betrayal, a wrongdoing, a suspect and all
Went completely unseen behind Aquarius walls
Hidden crimes and records forged
Stains of blood and transparent gloves worn

And still they don’t know (And still they don’t know)
And still they don’t see (and still they don’t see)
The blood in the snow (the blood in the snow)
The unfaithful disease (this unfaithful disease)

When she fell, a crack could be heard from miles afar
Her neck or her heart we could never be sure
She knows what you did, she knows where you are
A murder so seemingly couture
And its all your fault…and its all your fault




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Re: The Broken Hearted Gallows (User Rating: 1 )
by broken_soul08 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:34:24 PM AEST
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Such a deep poem.... Nice job.


Re: The Broken Hearted Gallows (User Rating: 1 )
by Rottenrioter on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:53:58 PM AEST
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wow strong right this so far is one of my favorite on here...keep up the good work


Re: The Broken Hearted Gallows (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:50:25 PM AEST
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this is beautiful and reaches out and doesn't stop till it touches ones heart who is feeling the same u
write verry well . . .

Dorian Chambers




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