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This ink stains the page
Like blood taints a razor blade

These lines are useless
When I can't see them
Though tears of emptiness

It's pointless
To fill a page of blankness
With words that are meaningless
When my mind's emptiness
Can be filled with it

Formatted off rhymed expression
Without a rhythm to go with it
That still leaves an impression

Because it's a part of me
It's my poetry [comments] => 13 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

My Poetry

Contributed by essentially9 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:04:48 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My Poetry

This ink stains the page
Like blood taints a razor blade

These lines are useless
When I can't see them
Though tears of emptiness

It's pointless
To fill a page of blankness
With words that are meaningless
When my mind's emptiness
Can be filled with it

Formatted off rhymed expression
Without a rhythm to go with it
That still leaves an impression

Because it's a part of me
It's my poetry

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-01-05 22:04:48]
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Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:17:22 PM AEST
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I love this...and I can't put into words why...I just do...great work
Love
Lauren

Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:25:55 PM AEST
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Like Frosted Flakes this poem is GrrrrrraATE!!!!

Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:41:24 PM AEST
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I feel like Pooh next to you..filled with fluff.. this is a piece of beauty..

Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:32:59 AM AEST
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Now this is poetry, writen well and the flow is awesome.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:21:10 AM AEST
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Good write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:03:33 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed reading this. great write.
cheers,
sue

Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 06:04:29 PM AEST
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this is really good!!! i really liked it. it's original,
eloquent, and i've thought some of thre same
things tho never written them out.

~waos

Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:17:37 PM AEST
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Another very well written piece..Your a Goddess

Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by GingerB on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:50:45 PM AEST
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thank you for commenting on my haiku. you are very gifted. I love this poem.

Ginny (girl)

Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:31:50 PM AEST
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I'd say you captured all our feelings into one grand poem, nicly done!

Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:56:25 PM AEST
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Nice write.

Spazzo

Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:29:30 AM AEST
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I have read several of your poems. You are beautiful.How you touch the pen I think we all would like to be able to write like you.
Next to you
My poems are baby poo.
Your friend Sinned :)

Re: My Poetry (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:01:23 PM AEST
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OOOO Nicely done. Some of my poetry is like this. Very well penned. Keep up the great work. *S* Cynthia

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