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Heart of a pieces
Contributed by
Sandy
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Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
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StoryPoetry
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The little girl was taught the ways of the big house Rising on the hill a town of its own all else small in comparison Dont disobey the women in black Church was of candles and incense Holy water for the cross orphanage of corridors rooms of darkness Alone It hurt Her heart broke into many pieces Mother, where are you Her angel of love was her comfort Embraced her in his warmth He tried to mend her broken heart there were too many pieces Maybe tomorrow God will answer her prayers She knelt down and she prayed her angel of love knelt beside her She had not abandoned God.
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2002-12-03 14:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Heart of a pieces
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 11:23:43 PM AEST (User
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Very nice story,I liked this as a form of poetry!
Well done, Christina |
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Re: Heart of a pieces
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 11:10:44 AM AEST (User
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This is so beautifully written...i like the lines that say....Embraced her in his warmth he tried to mend her broken heart...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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