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An Ocean Dream
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 06:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Days go by
and nights fade away,
just thinking of you,
I dream of the day-
When we'll be together,
walking along the ocean shores,
the breeze blowing through my hair,
my hand held tightly in yours.
Our feet in the sand,
the stars shining bright,
the moon leading our way,
to the perfect night.
I had you for a week,
but that wasn't enough,
I miss being in your arms,
I miss the feel of you touch.
Dreams have held me over
for just a little while,
but I need to see your face again,
I miss that beautiful smile.
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2002-12-03 18:30:00]
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Re: An Ocean Dream
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 08:16:18 PM AEST
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This is pretty. It paints a nice picture. I like it a lot.
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Re: An Ocean Dream
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 06:52:58 PM AEST
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This is such a beautiful dream ....one of my dreams is to just be able to see the ocean which will come true for me in January of this next year....because i've never seen the ocean in person and someone offered to show it to me and im going to take that person up on the offer....Thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot...
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Re: An Ocean Dream
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:35:12 PM AEST
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Another excellent early write of yours Candice,
You must've been born with the talent is all I can say!
Like we talked of before, your Mum did very well!
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: An Ocean Dream
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:40:55 PM AEST
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I'm glad that you like it. I think that I was born with my talent for both writing and sing I am very good at both, and I have my mom to thank for that. Not only are they also her talents but she has always encouraged me to do what I think is best.
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