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with rain pouring down my face
i think of the times you loved me
when you called me your princess
when we kissed the night away
why can't life be the same?
why does love occur?
why did you leave me for her?
so many questions run through my mind
but i only have so little time
to think them through
before i see you
with the gun in my pocket
and the letter by my side
i prepare to meet another day
ready to die at any minute
and i kno i shudn't live to die
live to love
but why love when the one u love
doesn't love you back?
why waste your time?
life is pointless
and i have nothing worth living for.
so there's nothing left but to end it all
simply with the trigger i fall
hell await my reched soul
suicides only toll
there's no way to escape
its eternity
and im stuck here all alone
suffering in pain and torment
as alone as i was before
and as alone as ill ever be
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Alone

Contributed by deep_down_inside_my_soul on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:45:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

alone i sit here
with rain pouring down my face
i think of the times you loved me
when you called me your princess
when we kissed the night away
why can't life be the same?
why does love occur?
why did you leave me for her?
so many questions run through my mind
but i only have so little time
to think them through
before i see you
with the gun in my pocket
and the letter by my side
i prepare to meet another day
ready to die at any minute
and i kno i shudn't live to die
live to love
but why love when the one u love
doesn't love you back?
why waste your time?
life is pointless
and i have nothing worth living for.
so there's nothing left but to end it all
simply with the trigger i fall
hell await my reched soul
suicides only toll
there's no way to escape
its eternity
and im stuck here all alone
suffering in pain and torment
as alone as i was before
and as alone as ill ever be

Copyright © deep_down_inside_my_soul ... [ 2005-01-08 09:45:53]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:50:32 AM AEST
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you are not alone *hugs* many will be able to relate, a very deep and moving poem
pixie xx

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by BlindSuicide on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:53:54 AM AEST
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I second Pixie's comment :-) (Very inspiring by the way) You are definately not alone, i used to be the same way but i came to terms with myself and realized that suicde was definately not the answer. I hope you come to realize this very soon as well. *Hugs*
Much ,much love
~Alucia~

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:01:36 AM AEST
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There is always a better day if you let it happen. Suicide is never the answer. It hurts the people most that you would least want to hurt. I hope to see more of your poetry here.

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Kratur on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:17:07 AM AEST
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Go ask God for help
and you will see
that he has no love for thee.

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by cottoncandy on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:02:57 AM AEST
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Cool poem...i loved it i gotta say...you have to consider that when you think you have it bad there's always someone out there who has it worse...and yet they manage to get up every morning with a smile..ask me..

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