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Array ( [sid] => 79065 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blurry Moon [time] => 2005-01-08 19:55:09 [hometext] => With every rose that's born another dies [bodytext] => There's a blurry moon in the sky tonight
As I look out of my little window
And with this blurry moon and it's shadowed light
All I hear is the silence that was spoke

Now the darkness blooms upon the cloudy kiss
And I'm with myself, all alone, oh no
But with the dark in bloom and my thoughts dismissed
How will I sleep tonight? I don't know...don't know

Ashes of diamonds now fall from my eyes
Along with the lost mem'ries
Ashes of diamonds now fall from my eyes
Along with the lost mem'ries
With the lost memories

In a state of mind that's un-recognized
With perfect circles spinning through my head
While in this state of mind that can't be disguised
All I hear is what wasn't ever said [comments] => 4 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 43 [informant] => stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Blurry Moon

Contributed by stalkee on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:55:09 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

There's a blurry moon in the sky tonight
As I look out of my little window
And with this blurry moon and it's shadowed light
All I hear is the silence that was spoke

Now the darkness blooms upon the cloudy kiss
And I'm with myself, all alone, oh no
But with the dark in bloom and my thoughts dismissed
How will I sleep tonight? I don't know...don't know

Ashes of diamonds now fall from my eyes
Along with the lost mem'ries
Ashes of diamonds now fall from my eyes
Along with the lost mem'ries
With the lost memories

In a state of mind that's un-recognized
With perfect circles spinning through my head
While in this state of mind that can't be disguised
All I hear is what wasn't ever said

Copyright © stalkee ... [ 2005-01-08 19:55:09]
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Re: Blurry Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:58:35 PM AEST
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Very good

Re: Blurry Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:40:06 PM AEST
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Moving, and very well written I really like this poem it moved me and engulfed my soul.

Re: Blurry Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:58:28 PM AEST
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amazing. this has all the elements of good poetry. i especially loved the ending. a poem is as only as good as its written to be.

Re: Blurry Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:01:59 PM AEST
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this is beautiful...i love your "ashes of diamonds" lines, this poem is my new favorite of yours ev, happy new year my friend:) hugs n' love nessa

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