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Array ( [sid] => 7915 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Moonswimming [time] => 2002-12-04 03:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => come to the earth
we burrow deep in the brown treasure
we snake through jungles green and soft
swim flashing rainbows in the translucent night
fly as swallows bending the air smooth arrows
being as babies gurgling under swimming suns
soaring as souls each night a new story to unfurl
lie stretched each nerve sighing in summer fields
and in a balmy Indian night swoon in the mystic
to rhythms sensual and hypnotic
pure hymns to our blissful sleeping spirit
catching orange flecks of burning clouds
turning the world to dreams of scarlet
curling like a puppy to sleep
we smile and let go
drifting slowly
far from earth
but happy to be
lost in this magic
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Moonswimming

Contributed by Steeleyes on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 03:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

come to the earth
we burrow deep in the brown treasure
we snake through jungles green and soft
swim flashing rainbows in the translucent night
fly as swallows bending the air smooth arrows
being as babies gurgling under swimming suns
soaring as souls each night a new story to unfurl
lie stretched each nerve sighing in summer fields
and in a balmy Indian night swoon in the mystic
to rhythms sensual and hypnotic
pure hymns to our blissful sleeping spirit
catching orange flecks of burning clouds
turning the world to dreams of scarlet
curling like a puppy to sleep
we smile and let go
drifting slowly
far from earth
but happy to be
lost in this magic

Copyright © Steeleyes ... [ 2002-12-04 03:30:00]
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Re: Moonswimming (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 04:01:06 AM AEST
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good write keep them coming

Re: Moonswimming (User Rating: 1 )
by Steeleyes on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 02:40:44 PM AEST
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thanks lil_angel ;D

Re: Moonswimming (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 10:07:36 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this so much it's so beautiful, with beauiful visions.....thanks for sharing it....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Moonswimming (User Rating: 1 )
by Steeleyes on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 06:49:18 PM AEST
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Thanks .:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. , there can be a time when we want to feel the whole natural world around us and feel it's innocence. Only those who keep at least a trace of their own innocence can do it though...

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