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what if he loved me when i loved him
what if i could live my life without feeling dim
what if i loved my life then knives wouldnt be an issue
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what if?

Contributed by Chooky on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:40:44 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

What if i could love so that i moved stars
what if was was preety boys would chase after me
what if he loved me when i loved him
what if i could live my life without feeling dim
what if i loved my life then knives wouldnt be an issue
what if i could live my life without saying what if?

Copyright Â© Chooky ... [ 2005-01-09 15:40:44]
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Re: what if? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:43:15 PM AEST
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A sad but good write.

Re: what if? (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:56:03 PM AEST
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Here is a field day..Spell check.."was was preety"??wtf does that mean?

What if you could write a good poem?
What if you could simply learn to spell?
What if you could stop wanting "pretty" boys(wtf again)?

Re: what if? (User Rating: 1 )
by devine_xox on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:02:38 PM AEST
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I understand what you are trying to say here and it’s sad. Because you are a new member just letting you know that before you post your poem there is a spell check just in case you are not sure of any words. Don’t be upset that someone has posted a rude comment. They are attacking you and this website does not condone that behavior. So continue on writing poetry don’t be discouraged by rudeness. xoxox

Re: what if? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:08:02 PM AEST
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great opening line, a heartfelt write, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: what if? (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:39:42 PM AEST
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you're on your way
grey but still good
thanks for sharing

Re: what if? (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:43:00 PM AEST
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Don't listen to "afterdark" that was a great poem

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