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Array ( [sid] => 79172 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Three seats over, and four rows down [time] => 2005-01-09 18:17:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You were the first thing I noticed,
The one who dared to frown,
The one who sat behind me,
Three seats over and four rows down.

I pretend to look behind me,
To stare at you every once in a while,
And sometimes you'd notice,
And stare back with a smile.

Then things where moved,
And now your only two seats away,
Now we've become friends,
And are together everyday.

But my feelings are getting stronger,
And I wish for more,
And again seats have been moved,
And now you sit right next door.

Now I know,
These feelings are true,
I need to come forward.
And explain them to you.

So I round up m courage.
And told you how I feel,
I thought you'd understand,
But you didn't seemed to ideal.

I thought you would feel,
Exactly the same way,
But instead you shrugged,
And just walked away.

Then I realized, it didn't matter how close we'd get,
Or if I held onto you every time me met,
It wouldn't even matter if we lived in the same town,
Because you'd always be three seats over,
And four rows down.
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Three seats over, and four rows down

Contributed by n0body on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 06:17:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You were the first thing I noticed,
The one who dared to frown,
The one who sat behind me,
Three seats over and four rows down.

I pretend to look behind me,
To stare at you every once in a while,
And sometimes you'd notice,
And stare back with a smile.

Then things where moved,
And now your only two seats away,
Now we've become friends,
And are together everyday.

But my feelings are getting stronger,
And I wish for more,
And again seats have been moved,
And now you sit right next door.

Now I know,
These feelings are true,
I need to come forward.
And explain them to you.

So I round up m courage.
And told you how I feel,
I thought you'd understand,
But you didn't seemed to ideal.

I thought you would feel,
Exactly the same way,
But instead you shrugged,
And just walked away.

Then I realized, it didn't matter how close we'd get,
Or if I held onto you every time me met,
It wouldn't even matter if we lived in the same town,
Because you'd always be three seats over,
And four rows down.

Copyright © n0body ... [ 2005-01-09 18:17:47]
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Re: Three seats over, and four rows down (User Rating: 1 )
by AllSmiles on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 06:24:22 PM AEST
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Nice. I understand the feeling myself.

Re: Three seats over, and four rows down (User Rating: 1 )
by punkhead13 on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 06:28:12 PM AEST
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I really like this. I'm kind of going through the same thing. keep writen' your good.

Re: Three seats over, and four rows down (User Rating: 1 )
by devine_xox on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 06:37:34 PM AEST
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At least your honest.I thought it was kinda cool

Re: Three seats over, and four rows down (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:42:39 PM AEST
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Good poem. At least you were able to let them know your feelings.

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