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if i could turn back time and look in your eyes
love would be apparent to each and every passerby,
the damn birds'd be singin' and the music be flowing
our lives would be ahead of us; that we'd be knowing,

oh, alas, life does not always follow one's plans
sometimes i dream n' wish i could go way-back-when,
darling, nothing will ever again be as it seemed
you are gone now forever as well as the dreams,

its simple and honest, a heartfelt true wish
since you've gone to the heavens i'm so lonelyish,
no wonder my soul says, oh please turn back time
for all things were lovely when you were mine.

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turn back time

Contributed by ladyfawn on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 06:35:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

if i could turn back time and look in your eyes
love would be apparent to each and every passerby,
the damn birds'd be singin' and the music be flowing
our lives would be ahead of us; that we'd be knowing,

oh, alas, life does not always follow one's plans
sometimes i dream n' wish i could go way-back-when,
darling, nothing will ever again be as it seemed
you are gone now forever as well as the dreams,

its simple and honest, a heartfelt true wish
since you've gone to the heavens i'm so lonelyish,
no wonder my soul says, oh please turn back time
for all things were lovely when you were mine.

§* *§
*|*

Copyright Â© ladyfawn ... [ 2005-01-09 18:35:58]
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Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 06:49:53 PM AEST
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this was excellent...havn't talked to you in forever, hope you are well friend

-Ev

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 06:53:48 PM AEST
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Pretty write though full of sadness and sentiment. (I like pictures, but am not so fond of automatic music. heh) Cheers!

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:14:31 PM AEST
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ahhh..if only..I'm sure he'd turn back time too.

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:13:44 PM AEST
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Hey nessa,
Very sad but written like a professional. Hope you get to feeling better realy soon.
Enjoy your chillens 'cause they'll be grown-n-gone before u know it.
Glad u finally posted a new poem. Been missing ya around here.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:35:01 PM AEST
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AAAhh So sad but I know the feeling I sometimes wish I could do that too!
I loved this write! Christina

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 10:06:16 PM AEST
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Oh Ness..it's good to see you again..and writing too..... this is so sad..... and I know nothing I can say will make you feel better..
so..Hugssssssss
Jenni

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 11:01:46 PM AEST
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Dearest Lady...I am glad to see you back. though sad very beautifully written poem..
thank you for the message..hugs :-) venkat

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:41:52 AM AEST
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brought a tear to my eye when I read this, wish I could give you a great big cuddle and make it all better for you hun *huggies*
love pix xx

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:03:55 PM AEST
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A beautiful anguished write.
You are the writer I wish I could be.
Thanks for this
Hugz
Dal

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:08:46 PM AEST
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I had to pause for a while to stop myself from crying.

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Ravensfire on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 03:16:15 PM AEST
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another great poem, awesome. gets you right in the heart, ty.

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:50:02 AM AEST
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Nessa, this was such an emotional sad write, i can very well relate to this poem. I wish i could turn back time too to change some mistakes i have done in the past. Well writen as always.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Alovinmann on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:53:54 PM AEST
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If only I could ease your pain...I would

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:09:35 PM AEST
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This is so sad. I hope you feel better. And it's a wonderful poem too.

Spazzo

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by littlemo911 on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:38:47 PM AEST
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i want to say that "everything happens for a reason," but that just seems to make it worse. like i couldn't control it and that i was helpless. i like the saying "***** happens" which is true. it happens and with time and a few tears the pain will lessen.

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:21:32 AM AEST
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So much sorrow so much sadness, if we all could only turn back time, our hearts might still be whole, cool and beautiful write.

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:30:23 PM AEST
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I was just writing something about the real being what is now and the past being only fading memories. So hard to go on, but really we have no other choice. To stagnate is to die.
Stitch

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:47:02 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful!

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:58:09 PM AEST
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Great poem and so sad.

Scott

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:27:45 AM AEST
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Nessa, you're words are felt by your readers. They hold a truth that everyone knows.

~Me~

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:52:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful!

If I could turn back time, I'd do so, so that you never felt any pain my dear heart. This is a stunning write and the title reminds me of a song by R Kelly called... well... turn back time lol. Its stuck in my head now. Another masterpiece hun.

Hugs 'n Love
- Becca

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 04:16:45 AM AEST
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Great write. There are times often that I wish I could go back too.

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 01:38:16 PM AEST
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This realy tugged at my heart strings. What a feeling of pure nastalgia i got from this. Beautiful Nessa, absolutely beautiful.

(((((Nessa)))))

Ben

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Monday, 14th July 2014 @ 05:11:20 PM AEST
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I think some times we all like to turn back time

Re: turn back time (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 26th October 2014 @ 12:22:10 PM AEST
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A delicate expression of eternal love. Beautiful. Just beautiful.

~Scorp

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