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Array ( [sid] => 79305 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ever So Softly [time] => 2005-01-10 17:03:22 [hometext] => It's pretty much self-explained. [bodytext] => It was taken away,
But ever so softly,
I'll never forget it,
Or how he didn't love me,

He knew all the words,
He had every line,
But when it was done,
I was yesterday's prize,

Did I know how it would end,
I probably just ignored it,
I wanted love so desperately,
All I got was resentment,

I should have refused,
At least he had fun,
Someone had to be hurt,
And I was the one.

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Ever So Softly

Contributed by poetryfreak on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:03:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It was taken away,
But ever so softly,
I'll never forget it,
Or how he didn't love me,

He knew all the words,
He had every line,
But when it was done,
I was yesterday's prize,

Did I know how it would end,
I probably just ignored it,
I wanted love so desperately,
All I got was resentment,

I should have refused,
At least he had fun,
Someone had to be hurt,
And I was the one.

Copyright © poetryfreak ... [ 2005-01-10 17:03:22]
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Re: Ever So Softly (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:20:16 PM AEST
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im sry for the hurt he caused you ...this is a very good poem though ....you are very talented...keep righting
tractorbabe

Re: Ever So Softly (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:26:45 PM AEST
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All I can say is wow..I can really relate to this. Im sorry for the pain youve been through, but youre not alone. You have talent, dont give up on that, because sometimes it can really get you through alot of dark, hurtful times. Keep writing.

Re: Ever So Softly (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:12:25 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry wat had happened to you. I can most definitely relate unfortunately. Thank you for writing this poem and posting it, you definitely put most of my thoughts on paper!! keep it up...very nicely done! TD

Re: Ever So Softly (User Rating: 1 )
by OzChick on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 08:29:57 AM AEST
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I've been there. Good write. Stay strong.

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