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Array ( [sid] => 79483 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => They Don't... [time] => 2005-01-11 19:04:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm not the perfect daughter,
That my parents try to see,
It's just not who I am,
And it's who I'll never be.

They don't care what I want,
They don't know who I am,
They know not of my poetry,
Or that I'm in love with Sam.

They don't care what I need,
They don't know my deep desire,
They don't feel the emotions,
That set my heart on fire.

I want to see them do it,
See them live my life,
Anger, hatred, love, and pain,
Let's see them sheath the knife. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 290 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Mesano [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

They Don't...

Contributed by Mesano on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:04:57 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I'm not the perfect daughter,
That my parents try to see,
It's just not who I am,
And it's who I'll never be.

They don't care what I want,
They don't know who I am,
They know not of my poetry,
Or that I'm in love with Sam.

They don't care what I need,
They don't know my deep desire,
They don't feel the emotions,
That set my heart on fire.

I want to see them do it,
See them live my life,
Anger, hatred, love, and pain,
Let's see them sheath the knife.

Copyright © Mesano ... [ 2005-01-11 19:04:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: They Don't... (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:12:15 PM AEST
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Goodness, I remember feeling like this. Never got to the knife part, but these feelings were still haunting me many years later.
Stitch

Re: They Don't... (User Rating: 1 )
by wray on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:19:01 PM AEST
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Woo go the angst :) How fortunate for Sam that his name rhymed with am ;)

Re: They Don't... (User Rating: 1 )
by feathercut on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:27:00 PM AEST
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i will not eat green eggs and ham
i could not would not sam i am
go on opera and talk about spam
your parents love you bla bla blam
grow up and stop writing crap
oops that doesnt rhyme with
sam

Re: They Don't... (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:35:39 PM AEST
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this is a great poem ...it descibes so much thats so ture ..please keep writing
tractorbabe

Re: They Don't... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:01:26 PM AEST
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brilliant and amazing poem. full of emotion. written well. as long as you have a good head on your shoulders, no one else is needed for anything.

Re: They Don't... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:21:01 PM AEST
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Well..I enjoyed this,good write

Re: They Don't... (User Rating: 1 )
by BuggY on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:47:47 AM AEST
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Well dun hunni!!! great poem!!! keep writing!!

And whoeva u r who sed it was crap.... get lost it was great!!!

hayley xxx

Re: They Don't... (User Rating: 1 )
by BuggY on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:47:48 AM AEST
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Well dun hunni!!! great poem!!! keep writing!!

And whoeva u r who sed it was crap.... get lost it was great!!!

hayley xxx

Re: They Don't... (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:41:54 AM AEST
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Well personally I think this poem is very well written, I think Sam should get a personality transplant!!

Love Dawny

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